Legend24 - Corporate Demons (Pt 2)

[Tupacfan]

Dam legend!

This was hot all the way around, the rhyme scheme was straight on point! I loved it.. i enjoyed reading every bit of it too, this reminds me of a piece i had written awhile back.. I'll share with ya'll sometimes..

My favorite part:

From all the souls who they've made resort to final measures

From all the individuals who now believe that only pain can bring pleasure

Rain is their only weather, forecasts show no better

Theft of possessions lasts a moment, this shit lasts forever

Overall good shit, keep delivering light that one day we will all see it in our plight...

And thanks for sharing with us fellow poet!

Peace!

 

[Legend24]

Thanks. Some stuff I been witnessing lately in the business world just had me shaking my head... had to get it out.

 

[QB - 6th Edition]

yo that was really hot legend.

i favor the part about
they paint their collar white and put a noose around their neck
and the soul isnt content if the heart is blind
deep shit yo... i gotta get back on my writing shit lol

 

[Legend24]

yo that was really hot legend.

i favor the part about
they paint their collar white and put a noose around their neck
and the soul isnt content if the heart is blind
deep shit yo... i gotta get back on my writing shit lol

Respects... thanks for the feedback.

Get back on it for sure, post up some of your stuff if you're feeling it.

 

[QB - 6th Edition]

Respects... thanks for the feedback.

Get back on it for sure, post up some of your stuff if you're feeling it.

where is part one
i wanna read it

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks. Some stuff I been witnessing lately in the business world just had me shaking my head... had to get it out.

Yea this piece was dizzope.

Keep dropping gems..

Peace!

 

[Legend24]

where is part one
i wanna read it

I didn't really like part one so I didn't post it. It got a bit too random for my liking but I'll finish it and post it up when I got some time.

 

[Legend24]

where is part one
i wanna read it

Here's part one to this piece. They are separate pieces but same subject matter...

Have you ever believed one could make a difference?
One could make decisions on what's real and what isn't
I used to believe we controlled our own, made our choices
Made ourselves heard by the masses as we raised our voices
Unearthed pearls from oysters, revealed their worth
Embracing the good in life as we shielded from the worst
Eyes turned to watch us as we broke the norm, evoked the storm
Labeled an outcast because we failed to conform
Misfits, a cancer, we don't fit in because we refuse to sin
Refuse to give in, reluctant to compromise
No, I'd rather save a soul and improve our lives
But their eyes are solely focused on justifying their lies
The world is a dark alley, those in charge are abusive
The innocent are unprepared, fools... are the excuses
We carry on with our lives like we're mutual exclusive
These misconceptions cause equality to be elusive
How are we striving for greatness when we've failed at respect?
How can we reach a level when we've missed the first step?
Those claiming to be on top cheated, took an escalator
Can't breathe from the pressure now, desperate for a respirator
And the rest, they cater, feed the fat cats with cash advances
The public pays corporate execs, yet receive no answers
No sense of accountability, just counting their millions
As honest individuals look up through the glass ceilings.