Legend24 - A Broken Reflection

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Damn I feel your pain in this poem. This is a great poem, I'm sure whatever you change the name to will be great.

Peace.
 
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Thanks man. Just getting back into the whole poetry thing... a few of the pieces I've read the past couple weeks have inspired me.
 
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I looooved this piece,

the word play is up to par, this whole piece right here flowed nicely, the feelings were all to familiar and felt... the lines that just stuck and had me smh

The seismic waves begin to flow

The repercussions, they are more powerful than you know

The ones closest feel their ground shaking

Water draining from their system as their foundation starts breaking

The dominoes begin to fall, one leans on the next

No one strong enough to hold their own, much less that of the rest

They collapse on each other, catastrophe at the darkest hour

Who knew such a thing could wield such tremendous power

The butterfly effect is taking over, a simple flap of the wings

Graces our lives for a moment, but look at the destruction it brings

Can we go back in time, possibly change its direction

Start with a clean slate while I attempt to tame your reflection.

This was great overall, you need to stay contributing to this jawn...

Thanks for sharing btw..
 
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