LE Tournament #3 - Predictions/SH!T Talking Thread!!

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iMpIoDez;3035677 said:
Son I'd do that shit for real, fuck you thought this was? All is well, 7-4-11 and if you scared go see a reverend..Fin-Town, 5 star tatted in my veins and the crazy thing is ion even bang but all my niggas claim...and guess what they ridin' homie, so save the tough talk pussy come finally show me..

LOL. U can fool these puss ass niggas and lame crackas on here that aint from the tip, but on my mama you aint coming round nowhere in Englewood with that bullshit nigga. Them shawties'll tear yo ass up by theyself. Nigga you prolly from Boys town or Oak Park some fucking where.
 
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judahxulu;3035874 said:
LOL. U can fool these puss ass niggas and lame crackas on here that aint from the tip, but on my mama you aint coming round nowhere in Englewood with that bullshit nigga. Them shawties'll tear yo ass up by theyself. Nigga you prolly from Boys town or Oak Park some fucking where.

I already told you where I hail, but it is what it is keep chirpin' birdie...
 
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iMpIoDez;3035903 said:
I already told you where I hail, but it is what it is keep chirpin' birdie...

maaaaan that aint shit to brag on, yall niggas cant even handle them kings over there. but whateva nigga i smell neutron on yo bitch ass anyway. u may be loosely associated but on my mama i can tell u aint plugged like that.
 
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judahxulu;3035935 said:
maaaaan that aint shit to brag on, yall niggas cant even handle them kings over there. but whateva nigga i smell neutron on yo bitch ass anyway. u may be loosely associated but on my mama i can tell u aint plugged like that.

it's 2011 bruh only bitches say "on my mama"...and I already said before that I'm neutron but best believe I can get my hands on some shit that'll air out ya whole block fuckboy
 
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iMpIoDez;3035936 said:
it's 2011 bruh only bitches say "on my mama"...and I already said before that I'm neutron but best believe I can get my hands on some shit that'll air out ya whole block fuckboy

i aint no 2011 ass nigga. on my mama, on B.O.S., on my kids u couldn't do shit on my block but what the folks let u do.u couldnt air out shit where im from on 66th and green and u couldnt air out shit where im out right now in nap. and u cant rap for shit neither u rhythm-less ass nigga. like i said u on some front shit for non-chicago niggas. bet u cant go up in cook county letting the phrases "im from fin-town" and "i'm a neutron" come out yo mouth on whateva deck u sitting on.. thoroughbreds like myself know better than that, joe. naw, lemme make it clear how far back i take it. we know better than that , chahlie knowutimtalmbout pussassnigguh?
 
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judahxulu;3035957 said:
i aint no 2011 ass nigga. on my mama, on B.O.S., on my kids u couldn't do shit on my block but what the folks let u do.u couldnt air out shit where im from on 66th and green and u couldnt air out shit where im out right now in nap. and u cant rap for shit neither u rhythm-less ass nigga. like i said u on some front shit for non-chicago niggas. bet u cant go up in cook county letting the phrases "im from fin-town" and "i'm a neutron" come out yo mouth on whateva deck u sitting on.. thoroughbreds like myself know better than that, joe. naw, lemme make it clear how far back i take it. we know better than that , chahlie knowutimtalmbout pussassnigguh?

u a silly ass nigga bumpin gums, I can't even take you serious anyway you finna get knocked out the tourney, da fuck..
 
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i got a question....as far as text battles what the fuck do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
 
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judahxulu;3040520 said:
i got a question....as far as text battles what the fuck do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..

shouldn't it be the same as if you're reading the lyrics to a song?
like

"Sick sick dreams of picnic scenes, two kids, sixteen
with M-16's and ten clips each
And them shits reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets?"

well that's jus my opinion tho
 
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nkflier23;3040591 said:
shouldn't it be the same as if you're reading the lyrics to a song?
like

"Sick sick dreams of picnic scenes, two kids, sixteen
with M-16's and ten clips each
And them shits reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets?"

well that's jus my opinion tho

And shit i see people saying flows good on here dont look or read shit like that. shits was cool tho..that u?
 
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"Make ends they hate you, be broke girls won't date you
That's why I relate to, choke your ass 'til your face blue, make you
Open the safe too
No matter how you call it (how you call it)
This "bralick", alcoholic
Like his weed green'd out like his brick solid
Distribute to kids who, take heart like Valentine, drink Valentine, all the time
Slugs hit you chest tap the spine
Flat-line
Heard through the grapevine, you got fucked foe times
Damn that three to nine, fucked you up for real doe'
"Slink steal slow"
As you remorse we feel no"

is another example of flow that looks good in text, I think it lies in if they use punctuation so you'll know when to pause and you'll get the flow they were thinkin of
 
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judah mad cuz I'm flowin' but he can't grasp it...it's okay bruh my rhyme scheme is too complex for simple minds, that's why you not finna make it to battle me in the championship hahaha
 
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judahxulu;3040520 said:
i got a question....as far as text battles what the fuck do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
I have seen verses like yours and ones that look even more complex...I always have to read raw materals verses twice.
Your verse was a similar structure but I got it in one read...the only reason I would say something against the style is
every line was "set up/punch, set up/punch" each bar wasn't random but there was something missing...IMO
I'll guess your gripe is with what I posted and you not seeing the reason for some comments...I would say my style is in between
what your looking for and a regular 123 like fazem's style if you read it the flow is there
I think there is three lines where the bar ends without rhyming with the first line and the off word ends up rhyming in the middle of the next line
the reason it looks mismatch...I feel u. I can't speak for others but, it's my style of writing and u don't like it...my bad
 
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Quick Question have any of you actually spit any of these verse you kats type on a audio track because the shit soulnd choppy and off flow for a lot of what I have read aloud no matter how I tried to read it...
 
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judahxulu;3040520 said:
i got a question....as far as text battles what the fuck do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..

I know what you mean. Flow should not be considered in a text battle. But I think wording should. For example, someone should lose points for posting garbage like this:

Your mom is fat/

BC when I look at her, I notice her big legs, big stomach, three chins, but I don't notice her ankles or her neck, what's up with that?/~

^^ That's trash BC the lines are very uneven and lazily written.

Before the judges began to vote, I told them to concentrate on punches, creativity, metaphors and maybe 5% on multis but for the most part, I feel like they are knowledgeable enough to distinguish between a good verse and a great verse. Tell you what, if anyone gets a vote they don't understand or agree with, I can ask the voters to explain a little more.
 
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