LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - Young-Ice -VS- b.c.o.dcru

[b.c.o.dcru]

...............yeah

 

[raw-material_ahh]

You both are checked in and take your time BC I want to see a good battle. I know the both of you will come through.

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

I was gonna post by tonite but, I kinda wanted Y-I to drop first...whatever happens I'm still droppin tonite

 

[raw-material_ahh]

i had to work this weekend

as such, i would like a 48 hr extension please

I can make verses due Monday night if your opponent agrees.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

You need 2 more lines ^^^

Mandatory 16 lines.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

no i only need 14 lines to beat him like premo

No exceptions. If you don't want to follow the rules, I'll have to do what I did last tournament. Once your opponent posts his 16, the thread will be closed and won't be open to voting until you PM me your 16. You can edit your verse now until he posts his.

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

Following ol' Nike slogans since yung swear shits sweet
phom at da mouth when I posit feet that skatter ya teeth
He's like a bitch u can't trust never happy at home*
U can always catch this whore at the mall on da phone
Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard
Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod
*knockin dat baggy shit off this nigga half pint frame
light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough
*it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up
Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows
There ain't no punch in ya lines, them just some rear end jokes
Disapate this square, leave his shape befuttled, and what remains of ya existance are some Luke warm puddles
Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap shit
fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit
Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift
*

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Young-Ice

I got a rolex flow bitch, watch your defeat

You're not lebron - you can't rock wit the heat

Sick 2nd line.

Go get a map - cause you lost on a beat

an Eye one like a cyclops from the street

Kind of like the first line.

You'll die like craps - i'm fly like bats

You're gay - paws like i high five cats

This is kind of wack. Lol.

You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks

You're a sewer pipe bitch, everythin you flows shit

Like it.

You swing both ways tryna bi yourself skills

And got your femail ass stamped and billed

Decent first line.

b.c.o.dcru

Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard

Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod

Kind of like the first line.

*knockin dat baggy shit off this nigga half pint frame

light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough

Decent.

*it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up

Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows

Tight first line.

Off the bat, both MCs had sick lines. Young-Ice edged b.c.o.dcru in the punch category IMO. On closer inspection, he also edged b.c.o.dcru on multis and wordplay. It was not as one-sided as I thought it was going to be. I picked out a few bars above to comment on. Vote - Young-Ice

 

[sniperk]

Young Ice: after learning the difference between 16 bars and 14 bars (I know, I know... you were trying to say that you only needed 14 bars to kill him), came with a nice tight verse... lots of multis... lots of punchlines... some funny... some witty... some wack as hell (raw pointed out the cat paws/pause one... though, in retrospect, if Lil Wayne said some shit like this STANS would probably declare it the best punchline ever written)... Ice has got the type of flow that is easily accessible...

b.c.o.dcru: Imma going to be honest, it took me a couple reads before I could understand the rhythm or the flow you were trying to come with... however, you didn't mess around and threw some angry-ass punches that I love to see in these battles...the "ice pick" line, young ice "freezing up" (and was that a little barb at raw material or am I reaching? "when things get raw") and the Vanilla Ice / Robert Van Winkle line previously mentioned.

This was a close battle for me. For me, personally, a battle verse has to have punchlines, style, humour and originality... I think Young Ice had the slight edge today.

VOTE: Young Ice

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

Ice no showed in a battle wit raw...I ain't tryin sway votes but some lines goin over heads.

 

[love yal]

Both verse were nice...young ice came different with styles...but b.c.o.dcru came with stronger punches.

Favorite line from young ice: you couldn't hold a candle to me with a menorah, I spit a plethora of rhymes to rape you like ya live in gomorrah.

Favorite line from B.c.o.dcru: light weight lame ice in ya vains but don't claim you thought it's evident when things get raw da young boy freeze.

My vote: b.c.o.dcru

Flow: tie
Verse structure: young ice
Metaphor:tie
Rhymes: tie
Creativity: tie
Punches: b.c.o.dcru

 

[Plop Star]

i vote for the bc dude just because i dont like canadians

 

[deaththreats]

i vote for the bc dude just because i dont like canadians

LMFAOOO....well damn...

 

[deaththreats]

NICE ASS BATTLE MAN...

YOUNG ICE:

I got a rolex flow bitch, watch your defeat

You're not lebron - you can't rock wit the heat

nice punch

Go get a map - cause you lost on a beat

an Eye one like a cyclops from the street

nice setup, but the jab was light

Fuck 16s - no pedo i don't need mo

Than fourteen lines to beat you like premo

decent jab, decent trash talk

Never fall, i stay up like an eagle

You're a bitch, put it on the record like a needle

ok jab

You'll die like craps - i'm fly like bats

You're gay - paws like i high five cats

nothing landed

You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks

You're a sewer pipe bitch, everythin you flows shit

nice setup jab, decent punch

You swing both ways tryna bi yourself skills

And got your femail ass stamped and billed

ok jab

you couldn't hold a candle to me with a menorah

i spit a plethora of rhymes to rape you like ya live in gomorrah

nice closer, nice metaphor, nice wordplay

BCO:

Following ol' Nike slogans since yung swear shits sweet

phom at da mouth when I posit feet that skatter ya teeth

nice wordplay, decent jab

He's like a bitch u can't trust never happy at home*

U can always catch this whore at the mall on da phone

LMAO...nice punch coming from the avi

Prone ta get*blush on my fist when I catch u off guard

Exposein bobby drakes brain when I split his eye pod

nice greasy talk, nice visual

*knockin dat baggy shit off this nigga half pint frame

light weight lame, ice in ya vains, but don't claim u tough

*it's *evident when things get raw, *da yung boy freeze up

nice greasy talk, nice play off the clothes from avi, nice punch at the end

Sun so rob vanwinkel wit non hedero flows

There ain't no punch in ya lines, them just some rear end jokes

nice set up jab wit the vanilla ice, and solid punch on the next line

Disapate this square, leave his shape befuttled,

and what remains of ya existance are some Luke warm puddles

nice set up jab, and solid punch with the lukewarm puddle play off the name

Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap shit

fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit

Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift

Nice closer

Punches: bco (had the harder landing punches IMO)

Structure: Tie

Wordplay: Ice

Metaphors: Tie

Opener: Ice (had the better opening 2 bars)

Closer: Tie

Overall Post: BCO (line per line, to me he edged it)

VOTE: TIE

This was close, and I hate to vote Tie, but I would have felt guilty by giving it to either rapper just for the sake of not calling it like I seen it

 

[Tupacfan]

this was good battle..

Lines that I like from young ice

You got no soul - like a pair of old kicks

You're a sewer pipe bitch, everythin you flows shit

Lines that I like from b.c.o,

Removing ya jaw, dislocate his arms wit dis rap shit

fall in and outta love wit y'all loss confidence an he quit

Sick wit da ice pick cru sculptin youngin paradyme shift

that being said, both battlers came with the punch line, the multi's i digg from young ice, i had to re-read B.c.o verse a few times to get the jist.. young ice had flow though, B.c.o came with the metaphors..

Like others stated, this was a close one and my vote today goes to........

Young ice..

because he brought creativity, flow up to par, multi's and nice punches..

 

[frozenheartwjlb]

I am going to have to say a tie as well. I agree with the dude above it was to close to call. Both had some sick lines, and both had some lines that were just kinda 'ehh'. It was evenly matched, and I feel like both could have came harder. But thats just my opinion. But I would'nt want to settle this battle based on a bullshit vote, when I honestly think it was a dead lock.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Damn. Close battle! It's a shame only one can move on. Congrats Young-Ice. Hope you enter the next tournament b.c.o.dcru!