LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - thedesolateone -VS- Plap Star

[Plop Star]

Put me in the game coach

 

[thedesolateone]

deal me in

 

[thedesolateone]

round 1 other words guess this egghead is breakfast he'll be salted
after i strait cook him, face lookin like brian peppers; real retarded
you'll never be successful though your name is plap star
because my heat will burst you till you're a collapsed star
when my gat goes plap! the sound off turns you around like your name was now called
if we have to be at odds i prostitute your sister , pimpslap your childs moms
have her fake teeth broke let all of them freaks know about thedesolateone's peepshow
starrin plaps milf, and lesson one's: deepthroat
ejaculated all over her black titties like lukes freakshow located in plap city
need to call the coroner after im finished whoring her
your sister is like lebrons free throws : money shots in florida
talked pimp shit in your wack bars you really capin; i really mack broads
let random niggaz jack off in your sisters slacked jaws
Star from the sunshine state of rick ross; COs pointing niggaz out at trial
detectives take a p out of plap , read his name from the back:
hes a rats pal ; mike jack on his 2nd album

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Nice!

Verses due by tomorrow before midnight ET, Plap Star. Good luck!

 

[Plop Star]

they call me plap because i grind tight

im that lil nigga that done hit more licks than a dyke

always come from left field they say my mind aint right

cause ill do some dirty shit like snitch and get you 20 to life

you do 20 get out and i murk you on sight

just so i can say im the only nigga who sent to somebody to hell twice

funny how i got yo sister she caught me in yo house with no clothes on

before you kno it hers was gone and yo mother walked out with my shorts on

i fucked em both but that aint the only thing that got my homeboys laughin

yo mama introduce me at family reunions as her son in law and her baby daddy

and im banned from boston my problem solving became a public nuisance

because the nesw cut off the celtics game to talk about how i was shooting

talkin player shit but everybody know desolate niggas aint got no hoes

tryin to study me but real players know players get chose

and these hoes get wet when they hear about my cashflow

i had no choice but to be the shit cause my pops was an asshole

 

[raw-material_ahh]

IDK. This was a real hard battle to judge. Nothing specifically jumped out at me. I'd vote a tie but I don't like taking the easy way out. I want someone to win. First, I'll talk about what I liked. In thedesolateone's verse, I liked the first line, the money shots in florida line, and he stayed battling. As for Plap Star, his first 4 lines were not battle oriented IMO. That's a mistake to waste 25% of your verse right off the bat on upping yourself. I felt though the rest of the verse was decent enough but was fighting an uphill battle because thedesolateone's creativity stayed jabbing, was consistent. Vote - thedesolateone

 

[sniperk]

thedesolateone: had me laughing right outta the gate... even though this verse isn't going to win points based on style or lyrical dexterity, it was the funniest battle rhyme I have read thus far... the whole bedroom scenario reminded me of one of those grimey songs MC Ren used to spit back in the day that would make you laugh and cringe at the same time (the things he would do to people with 'broomsticks'...LOL)...des one smacked around Plap Star pretty bad with his lines...

PlapStar: flow was a bit nicer... came out the gate with a cocky swagger that can sway a crowd to your side in a battle... "feeding" a little bit with his own version of events about what he would do to desolateone and his moms, sister, etc... but that shit was funny too so I'm not going to take off any points for that... raw material touched on part of the problem with the verse though, too much taking about yourself and not enough about your opponent... all right to brag at the start of your verse but you don't want to waste valuable lines bragging at the close... that's where you need to hit them with the knockout blow...

VOTE: thedesolateone

 

[love yal]

Good match between Thedesolateone vs Plap star both came strong.

Favorite line from Thedesolateone: round 1 other words guess this egg head is breakfast will be salted after I strait cook him, face looking like brain pepper retarded

Favorite line from Plap Star: always come the left field they say my mind anit right... I'm banned from Boston my problem solving became a public nuisance.

Punches: thedesolateone

Flow: tie

Creativity: tie

Multies: tie

Structure: tie

Metaphor: thedesolateone

Personals: tie

My vote: Thedesolateone....Plap star verse was interesting but Thedesolateone verse was stronger...good luck to both battlers.

 

[deadpoolRKO]

this was a ridiculously awesome battle.

Desolate's verse was nice with punches and metaphors.

that Collapsed star line was so ill.

My votes for Plap Star.

That " Sent someone to hell twice " line and his whole verse was consistent with flow and it made me laugh multiple times.

 

[Tupacfan]

dang, this was a nice battle, i thourougly enjoyed this..

But right off the bate, I have to give to desolateone, he really came thru and battled all the way.. the punch lines hit hella hard too lol.. that's tight.. i'm definitely taking notes hahaha.. But i digg the metaphors, the multis, out of all battles, by far this is one of his great piece imo..

Moving on, palp star came with it too, but it didn't hit as hard as desolateone.. but i like the flow though.

Good luck to both of ya'll..

Peace!

 

[Plop Star]

preciate the advise
and when i saw his vere i was like damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn but im comin back next tournament to get in somebody ass

 

[thedesolateone]

i still have no idea what plap means can you fill me in, is it florida slang?

i like to thank all the voters for doing what they do even if you voted against me thnks for providin your attention and judgin

i got three votes in a row so i think thats a rap

i wanna thnk plap star for showin up to the battle and competin

i was a little unsure if i should post first cause by readin his threads i saw he was kinda witty im sure he will be better prepared in his next battle

 

[Plop Star]

i still have no idea what plap means can you fill me in, is it florida slang?

i like to thank all the voters for doing what they do even if you voted against me thnks for providin your attention and judgin
i got three votes in a row so i think thats a rap
i wanna thnk plap star for showin up to the battle and competin
i was a little unsure if i should post first cause by readin his threads i saw he was kinda witty im sure he will be better prepared in his next battle

lol cant let you know what that means but good battle you did that shit

 

[thedesolateone]

plap = a slap to the face using the penis

good lookin out on the decipherin . i never heard of that but it makes sense.

wished i knew that before the tournament

 

[frozenheartwjlb]

Both came hard, nothing to fancy just some solid verses. I agree with Raw that nothing really jumped out at me. My favorite line from thedesolateone was, "need to call the coroner after im finished whoring her
your sister is like lebrons free throws : money shots in florida" that shit was tight. My favorite line from plap was, "funny how i got yo sister she caught me in yo house with no clothes on
before you kno it hers was gone and yo mother walked out with my shorts on" lmao that shit had me laughin. My vote goes to Plap Star, he had the humor on his side. And when I am listen to rap battles I like to hear comedy jabs more than anything else. Props to both and goodluck.

 

[Plop Star]

plap = a slap to the face using the penis

thats the most creative thing anybody guessed

 

[Plop Star]

www.urbandictionary.com

lol thats run by crackers, somethin gotta be in the streets 10 years before it get on there

we only at 4

 

[Plop Star]

11. Plap

buy plap mugs, tshirts and magnets

To fart out semen onto another person's face.
"My girlfriend spat spunk up my arse last night so i plapped fuck outta her"

lmao fuck no, you might as well start the "what does plap mean" thread

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Hoping to see you in the next tournament Plap Star! thedesolateone moving on. 2nd round threads going up very soon.