thedesolateone
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my mic sounds nice check one
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ItzGravitation
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sniperk is def going to lose if dude has been getting passes through most of them
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Disciplined InSight
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ItzGravitation;2406109 said:
You got your pom poms and cheer leading outfit out for desolateone again I see...
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ItzGravitation
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Disciplined InSight;2409767 said:
you mad cuz he beat you again?
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Disciplined InSight
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ItzGravitation;2409891 said:
desolateone never beat me before...but your dick riding is atrocious, but it's nothing you're use to.
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ItzGravitation
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Disciplined InSight;2409906 said:
why would i dick ride a dude i dont know?
i cant just see that dude has skill?
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Disciplined InSight
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ItzGravitation;2409925 said:
No........
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thedesolateone
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rofl........i will battle d.i. again sometime
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thedesolateone
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if sniper k dont drop soon i will
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Fuck this sweet transvestite freak from Transsexual, Transylvania
Your so-so homo flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya
Now I will fuckin' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
What do fuckin' vampires have to do with hiphop? Shit, I wanna know...
Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
This Nosferatu will drop off like Andropov once I pop the Kalashnikov off
My "metasixes" be crucifixes, metaphorically lop them Red Sox off
You claiming to be off the same block the New Kids On the Block's off (you that soft?)
Boston-bred "Booga Bandit Bitch" got get Solar to get them rocks off
'Cuz I don't give a massive two shits about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
This I.C. square is so pussy he got two tits and a clit like that rude bitch
That sang "Umbrella-ella-ella", I'll put this dirt dog down like Old Yeller
Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller, ya feel me bitch? (no Helen Keller)
So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce
Your so-so homo flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya
Now I will fuckin' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
What do fuckin' vampires have to do with hiphop? Shit, I wanna know...
Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
This Nosferatu will drop off like Andropov once I pop the Kalashnikov off
My "metasixes" be crucifixes, metaphorically lop them Red Sox off
You claiming to be off the same block the New Kids On the Block's off (you that soft?)
Boston-bred "Booga Bandit Bitch" got get Solar to get them rocks off
'Cuz I don't give a massive two shits about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
This I.C. square is so pussy he got two tits and a clit like that rude bitch
That sang "Umbrella-ella-ella", I'll put this dirt dog down like Old Yeller
Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller, ya feel me bitch? (no Helen Keller)
So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce
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thedesolateone
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think you in a horror flick when i torture you like auschwitz
put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly pussies
though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior
now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
cock my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
wash you up when i cock it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
between you and me you will be last like y and z
creep with the gun i named irony to blast sniper k close range,wont hear my footsteps like a silent e
when i hear a siren, flee
to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase
put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly pussies
though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior
now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
cock my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
wash you up when i cock it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
between you and me you will be last like y and z
creep with the gun i named irony to blast sniper k close range,wont hear my footsteps like a silent e
when i hear a siren, flee
to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase
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Sniperk vs. Thedesolateone
Favorite line from Sniperk
That sang Umbrella ella-ella I'll put this dirt dog down like Old yeller Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller
Favorite line from Thedesolateone
Think you in a horror flick when I torture you like auschwitz knuckes to your chin like philosophers
No hate vote not against of no battlers but this match is really good and creative
Punches:tie
Structure verse:tie
Creative: Sniperk
Metaphor: thedesolateone
Multies: tie
Flow:tie
Rhymes: tie
Its hard vote, I was going to say tie, but my vote goes to : Thedesolateone.....both champs came very strong, verses good to read.
Good luck to thedesolateone and Sniperk, continue with your good work
Vote: thedesolateone
Favorite line from Sniperk
That sang Umbrella ella-ella I'll put this dirt dog down like Old yeller Exposing your tricks like Penn and Teller
Favorite line from Thedesolateone
Think you in a horror flick when I torture you like auschwitz knuckes to your chin like philosophers
No hate vote not against of no battlers but this match is really good and creative
Punches:tie
Structure verse:tie
Creative: Sniperk
Metaphor: thedesolateone
Multies: tie
Flow:tie
Rhymes: tie
Its hard vote, I was going to say tie, but my vote goes to : Thedesolateone.....both champs came very strong, verses good to read.
Good luck to thedesolateone and Sniperk, continue with your good work
Vote: thedesolateone
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Disciplined InSight
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Young-Ice;2426157 said:
Please....you're nobody special.
I'm not a sore loser plus I didn't lose legitimately, but it is a MINOR problem with the process of voting on TEXT battles, which nobody knows how to do (only a select few)..and oh I see you didn't vote on that battle. I wonder why?But that's okay, no need to answer.
Shut the fuck up.
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ItzGravitation
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i really liked Sniperks verse
even tho his verse towards me was wack dude did a lil research for these
dude did start off with some weak shit and ended with some bullshit but like a sandwhich the good stuff was in the middle
Right around the time he dissed ice i think
Desolates ones verse was more organized tho while sniper ks verse seemed based on word association.
id give this one a tie tho
even tho his verse towards me was wack dude did a lil research for these
dude did start off with some weak shit and ended with some bullshit but like a sandwhich the good stuff was in the middle
Right around the time he dissed ice i think
Desolates ones verse was more organized tho while sniper ks verse seemed based on word association.
id give this one a tie tho
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raw-material_ahh
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A little over an hour left for votes! Bout to make mine in a few minutes. Up.
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raw-material_ahh
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Each battler had some real sick lines. For example, I liked these from sniperk:
Now I will fuckin' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce
'Cuz I don't give a massive two shits about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
This I.C. square is so pussy he got two tits and a clit like that rude bitch
and these from thedesolateone:
last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly pussies
now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior
With that said, I like the JUST-ICE and R.I.P. wordplay in sniperk's verse. And in the last two lines of his verse, they were SICK. Nice rhyming with a punch that made sense. The Massachusetts line was hot too, plus nice rhymes. In thedesolateone's verse, that "stereotype snipers" personal was crazy. Nice personal. I was also feeling the line about stuffing rap pages down sniperk's tight neck/internal rhyme. That was sick. And I loved the wordplay off "week-end."
With that said, each battler had weak lines, IMO, these were them:
sniperk
What do fuckin' vampires have to do with hiphop? Shit, I wanna know...
Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
Fuck this sweet transvestite freak from Transsexual, Transylvania
Your so-so homo flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya
thedesolateone
cock my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
wash you up when i cock it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
when i hear a siren, flee
to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
think you in a horror flick when i torture you like auschwitz
put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase
It was just a mixture of lack of wordplay, corniness, easy rhyming, filler and cutting some stuff short. They could have been improved.
What I did was read every line without knowing who wrote them unless it was obvious if I got the personals like the sniper-stereotype line, then I rated each line and ranked them from best to worst. I do this every time I vote on an important battle to eliminate bias. After doing this, I averaged the lines which gave sniperk a verse of 7.2 and thedesolateone a verse of 6.8. My vote goes to sniperk barely.
Now I will fuckin' maim ya... slit your throat, impale your heart
No JUST-ICE for "the desolate one" 'cuz Sniper Van Helsing will R.I.P. you apart
So eat this final meal of Easter ETHER before I burn you with this cross
No resurrection this time 'round either, looks like thedesolateone finally lauce
'Cuz I don't give a massive two shits about this Massachusettes Rubic's Cube snitch
This I.C. square is so pussy he got two tits and a clit like that rude bitch
and these from thedesolateone:
last tourney you got ko'd like a wussie for spitting flowery poetry
did your conscience feel guilty? just reinforces the stereotype snipers are cowardly pussies
now your already biting at mic check ? im so surreal have you eat every word
stuff my rap pages down your tight neck; internal rhyme tookin to the level of absurd
though your rhymes are infantry your really not a shooter and are diagnosed with aerophobia
behind your computer this weakling is a week-end rhyme warrior
With that said, I like the JUST-ICE and R.I.P. wordplay in sniperk's verse. And in the last two lines of his verse, they were SICK. Nice rhyming with a punch that made sense. The Massachusetts line was hot too, plus nice rhymes. In thedesolateone's verse, that "stereotype snipers" personal was crazy. Nice personal. I was also feeling the line about stuffing rap pages down sniperk's tight neck/internal rhyme. That was sick. And I loved the wordplay off "week-end."
With that said, each battler had weak lines, IMO, these were them:
sniperk
What do fuckin' vampires have to do with hiphop? Shit, I wanna know...
Biting my punchlines like necklines? You rushin' your flow / I'm Russian your flow
Fuck this sweet transvestite freak from Transsexual, Transylvania
Your so-so homo flow's so weak not even Mister Cee will claim ya
thedesolateone
cock my arm back for long range,slap fire out of you so hard only arms you will handle are arm slings
wash you up when i cock it back a-gain and slap water out of you ..........palm springs!
when i hear a siren, flee
to your moms place spray starch on your wrinkled moms face
think you in a horror flick when i torture you like auschwitz
put a gun in every orifice and knuckles to your chin like philosophers
then put the iron to her , chop her up ,and stuff her in a guitar case
wont leave a print or trace to avoid a foot or car chase
It was just a mixture of lack of wordplay, corniness, easy rhyming, filler and cutting some stuff short. They could have been improved.
What I did was read every line without knowing who wrote them unless it was obvious if I got the personals like the sniper-stereotype line, then I rated each line and ranked them from best to worst. I do this every time I vote on an important battle to eliminate bias. After doing this, I averaged the lines which gave sniperk a verse of 7.2 and thedesolateone a verse of 6.8. My vote goes to sniperk barely.
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raw-material_ahh
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Congratulations to thedesolateone for winning LE Tournament #2! You beat Plap Star, NuffRespect No-Showed against you in round 2, you beat the former champ in the Semi-Finals, Disciplined InSight and you beat sniperk who also made it to the Semi-Finals last year. You have skills and congratulations again!
And gotta tip my hat off to sniperk who made it to the final 4 last tournament and final 2 this tournament. Good work.
And gotta tip my hat off to sniperk who made it to the final 4 last tournament and final 2 this tournament. Good work.
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