LEMZPOCALYPSE;8089637 said:
TheEyeronic1;8089621 said:
Ol Jay's;8089607 said:
Kat;8089579 said:
Ol Jay's;8089563 said:
chicks aren't to be taken seriously all the time, you might say something that gets em in their feelings, then they're dissing you in public and pretending like you never had a chance at em
It's like everything you say can be flipped.
Ignore an IC males advances and watch how quickly the script flips..shit is like clockwork and rather amusing.
that's why I'm the GOAT, not just speaking gender specific, I post for people
Everyone feels me
Aye nigga.
Here's your chance to shine with God.
You've been waiting for this your whole life.
https://soundcloud.com/user462056207/hard-work-rough-1-verse
Left the instrumental in that bitch. Have at it or never talk about doing anything rap related better than me.
You def need an A&R bruh... rappin about hard working in a soft instrumental is an oxymoron. We dont feel the gring. We dont fell the sweat the pain. that beat is for sex songs Imo.
You need direction real talk
Here is an example of your LUKEWARM , SOFT LYRICS ON A SOFT BEAT ABOUT PUTIN IN WORK
Gettin blessed by the LEMZOLATION
i m putin a fucking hard work
aint duckin pain i sledge that fucking homework
beat regulator i slap that sound thats how that game work
get soft you end up outsynched you ll need a clock work
no big glock im knifing that beat that a slice work
cut the tempo in dices throw them on my hot fire voice cause im getting bizurk
Dont listen too close when im cookin youll get burn that one of them perks
wait till the the file is ready pay me B send the details to my clerk
Give life to your lyrics. Give some METAPHORS to your lyrics. Make us LAUGH , CRY, FEEL THE DANGER with your lyrics. Your flow need some words to become A WAVE nigga.