kamikaze mind

[Tupacfan]

Dam Jay,

you went all in on this one..

I feel you on lack of inspiration, I'm there right now with poetry as well..as tho I'm at a battle with myself as well.

I thought it was well illustrated, and had substance that I'm lacking haha..

And thanx for sharing!

Peace.

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

damn jay....you went in something fierce on this piece....i actually was feeling that way all last year...like literally losing my mind and can't stay focus on the prize to save my life...every line i can picture the craziness of isolation, lack of love, empty promises, and a way of escape...reading this make me realize that poetry is the shit lol...bottom line good work as always

keep dropping those lines of key to lock called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[jayy.prime]

thanks yall..i just can't even believe how i was ALWAYS inspired, always droppin' somethin' hot..now its like i come on the IC daily and NEVER post JACK and it makes me sooooo..... disappointed and bitchy lol..i try to get it back, but it refuses...and everybody knows u can't force it...but thanks for the feedback guys..mucho appreciated

 

[BlackRoses]

soo many words

but i dont know where to start

pulling words from the air

some i'm grabbing from the heart

sorry for the hiatus

i've failed to play my part

but what can i say

when ur blocked, ur blocked..

theres no inspiration

i can no longer pull it from the top

and drop a hot rhyme

in 5 minutes flat

such a fuckin' dissapointment

i'll admit to that

it could be the depression

or it could just be a lesson

that i'm so much lesser...

than i used to be

more frail

less substance

than what used to be

i fuckin' hate my man of 5 years

for what he does to me

but i'm used to him

and he claims he loves me

but i cant front

like the other feelings aren't there

sitting in an empty room

staring at that empty chair

wishing..

that somehow

he could be there

but i slap myself awake

"don't let your thoughts

stray to there"

i fuckin' hate myself

for even beginning to go there

playing cat and mouse with myself

driving myself crazy

handfuls of hair

ripped out..eyes blazing

he's the old cassette i keep playing

trying to grab onto that old thing

but it just aint the same

when you give up and stick in

that new cd

you still want that old thing back

i can't relax

in my own home..

throat burns in my own home

sometimes i'm afraid to walk into my own home

and my only escape is into my mind

maybe thats my downfall

and my slide to insanity

too many thoughts flying around

my mind seriously lacks..boring symmetry

so it tries to destroy itself

in an act of valor

an act of bravery

to protect itself..perhaps

because it's always the same old time lapse

fast forward time with HIM

rewind it with number one

cap guns

bustin' off in my mind

banners of purple scribble

flying by

a beautiful mind??

or a crazy bitch?

sometimes i think, i'm just not equipped for this

but who else could channel their insanity like this?

a kamikaze mind..

and i'm proud of this shit.

I feel u with this line...i promise myself that everytime i write a poem...make sure it comes from the heart

 

[bl4ck]

Jayy, i feel like i know you, though we obviously dont. but I appreciate you for this. thank you.

 

[It's Mook!]

thanks yall..i just can't even believe how i was ALWAYS inspired, always droppin' somethin' hot..now its like i come on the IC daily and NEVER post JACK and it makes me sooooo..... disappointed and bitchy lol..i try to get it back, but it refuses...and everybody knows u can't force it...but thanks for the feedback guys..mucho appreciated

Lol, best believe that when yo ass do get inspired & write somethin its always on point. Just like dis one. Right now I feel like I'm on a hot streak as far as shit I wanna write but I know sometime soon I'ma get stuck & just wanna punch da monitor whenever u or anyone else drops somethin dope on here. On some "y can't I do THAT?!" shit.. lol much props.

 

[jayy.prime]

Lol, best believe that when yo ass do get inspired & write somethin its always on point. Just like dis one. Right now I feel like I'm on a hot streak as far as shit I wanna write but I know sometime soon I'ma get stuck & just wanna punch da monitor whenever u or anyone else drops somethin dope on here. On some "y can't I do THAT?!" shit.. lol much props.

mannnnn!! i do the SAME shit! Like, dmn..why didn't I think of that??? lol..but yoo..txt me or smthn so we can work out something for me you an RP to tackle..its about that time! lol

 

[VSOP]

bout time you get ya country ass back in here and drop some knowledge--you still got it jay