********Jeff Axel the Blackman vs. Goobs******** (UPDATED Disses released, post #1)

[ShencotheMC]

I have it on good authority that this beef/battle or whatever you wanna call it will continue on into the week

 

[BlackAX410]

Lmao damn I just went thru the thread to see wat I missed this shit is so entertaining I swear this has to be in the FOF

 

[BackInWhite]

do i need to dust off my respect 10 avi?

 

[P. Town]

Did Goobs ever clear up that situation with Tyga?

 

[Brova]

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Shenco, real talk, you got a LONG way to go if you wanna make it.

rMell is SHITTIN on you lil nigga

http://soundcloud.com/rmell/highachi

Diggy Simmons is SHITTIN on you!

[video=youtube;WcM6p7pT4-o]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcM6p7pT4-o[/video]

Mac Miller is SHITTIN on you son!

[video=youtube;a-rqu-hjobc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-rqu-hjobc[/video]

 

[qawshun]

ahhh i voted for the wrong one jeff got this dude lmao funniest joint i've heard in months. but i'm not going through 150 pages to see comebacks so if there are any what pages are they on ?

 

[Daniel Plainview]

Oh, and the threadstarter did some snake shit and got the other thread buried. That other thread which featured the premiere of "Go Ctazy" was headed to the FOF until it mysteriously got moved and buried.

i dont know why you keep sayin that though. i responded to your first post if you missed it:

aye thats 100% bullshit.

mods moved this thread to donkey after it went plat in the reason months ago

i then said (in this thread) that the thread is about rappers so it should be moved back to the Reason

when the diss tracks come out, i bumped the thread and asked that it be moved from donkey back to reason, and someone moved it

to be clear, Ive never sent a pm to anyone, mods included

 

[ShencotheMC]

Shenco, real talk, you got a LONG way to go if you wanna make it.

rMell is SHITTIN on you lil nigga

http://soundcloud.com/rmell/highachi

Diggy Simmons is SHITTIN on you!

[video=youtube;WcM6p7pT4-o]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcM6p7pT4-o[/video]

Mac Miller is SHITTIN on you son!

[video=youtube;a-rqu-hjobc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-rqu-hjobc[/video]

you right. Ima start doing more shows now because you said that

 

[ShencotheMC]

I have it on good authority that this beef/battle or whatever you wanna call it will continue on into the week

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[Brova]

you right. Ima start doing more shows now because you said that

It aint about doin more shows its about working on your flow!

It's about having an ear for beats and riding a beat!

It's about NOT spittin like you in a freestyle competition when you're trying to create a SONG!

It's about creatin your own mixtape or digital EP!

It's about havin swag and not dressin like Darius Rucker from Hootie and the Blowfish!

Don't do a show until you've accomplished these things first!

 

[Brova]

i dont know why you keep sayin that though. i responded to your first post if you missed it:

to be clear, Ive never sent a pm to anyone, mods included

Whatever Daniel.

And I'm sure you've got a bridge in Brooklyn to sell us too.

 

[BackInWhite]

one thing i've noticed about ic rappers is that they don't wanna hear shit
a nigga can't tell you what they think will help you in the long run cuz these niggas already think they the greatest

 

[Brova]

one thing i've noticed about ic rappers is that they don't wanna hear shit
a nigga can't tell you what they think will help you in the long run cuz these niggas already think they the greatest

Co-Sign!

These niggas spend 100% of their time on writin lyrics

But have wack flows, pick corny beats, have no concepts and make weak hooks

 

[ShencotheMC]

Ok see I can take, the instigation. I can take the dickriding of certain artists. I can take being called a hater. I can even take the shots at my hustle. But what I will NOT take, is my music being insulted

 

[eonimod]

Square biz....more to it than just internet rhyming

[video=youtube;0prh1mwi9eq]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0prh1mwi9eq&feature=player_detailpage#t=50s[/video]

 

[Brova]

Ok see I can take, the instigation. I can take the dickriding of certain artists. I can take being called a hater. I can even take the shots at my hustle. But what I will NOT take, is my music being insulted

Here's your track "Red Rain of Pain"

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7207062

1. You CHASIN the beat. You need to ride the beat.

2. Your flow isn't musical, it sounds like you in a cypher.

3. The beat you picked is amateurish.

4. You crammin too many words into your bars to have a flow like the one you're using.

5. Breath control. PLEASE work on it.

6. Your lyrics are like white girl goth poetry.

NOW, compare your shit to rMell's :

http://soundcloud.com/rmell/highachi

[video=youtube;c9ruWOoryDE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c9ruWOoryDE[/video]

1. SMOOTH flow

2. The beat he picked is butter. Sounds like Tribe, Pharcyde, Souls of Mischief shit.

3. He rides the beat, and this creates a hypnotic musical experience.

4. Dude never sounds like he's TRYING to rap, he EFFORTLESSLY spits dope rhymes.

5. He's confident and in control on this track.

6. He has a relaxed flow with lyrics that are clearly personal and relatable.

 

[ShencotheMC]

Here's your track "Red Rain of Pain"

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7207062

1. You CHASIN the beat. You need to ride the beat.

2. Your flow isn't musical, it sounds like you in a cypher.

3. The beat you picked is amateurish.

4. You crammin too many words into your bars to have a flow like the one you're using.

5. Breath control. PLEASE work on it.

6. Your lyrics are like white girl goth poetry.

NOW, compare your shit to rMell's :

http://soundcloud.com/rmell/highachi

[video=youtube;c9ruWOoryDE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c9ruWOoryDE[/video]

1. SMOOTH flow

2. The beat he picked is butter. Sounds like Tribe, Pharcyde, Souls of Mischief shit.

3. He rides the beat, and this creates a hypnotic musical experience.

4. Dude never sounds like he's TRYING to rap, he EFFORTLESSLY spits dope rhymes.

5. He's confident and in control on this track.

6. He has a relaxed flow with lyrics that are clearly personal and relatable.

And yet your mans is following ME on twitter right? Lol come on man Goobs lost

 

[Daniel Plainview]

Whatever Daniel.

And I'm sure you've got a bridge in Brooklyn to sell us too.

its all there to see, no PMs

youre confused

 

[G.R.I.P. Money $$$]

mane, a nigga like me been tryin to capitalize off goobs ic buzz for the longest..

and the opportunity was right here for me!!

wtf was i doin..observing and being entertained..

smghmfh x3

 

[Brova]

And yet your mans is following ME on twitter right? Lol come on man Goobs lost

???? What the fuck does THAT have to do with anything lil nigga?

Havoc from Mobb Deep is following ME on Twitter.

Does that mean I'm a better producer than him? Know more about music than him?

Dude aint followin you on Twitter because he looks up to you.

He followin you so he can gain a new fan and get more bread.

See, the reason why you'll NEVER make it is because you don't think you have room for improvement.

You lil niggas say everyone is "hatin" whenever constructive criticism is givin