ItzGravitation vs thedesolateone

[ItzGravitation]

regardless dude changed his verse.

I went after dude so for him to change his verse while i type mine is a violation.

I win dude.

 

[The Smooth One]

these rhymes are lead when they gravitate to you

itll blow you back like low gravity

anyplace but in the L.E. is where you rather be

then in the O.R. with physicians tinkering in your cavity

that the blow did to you

your not lyrical your bars are a subject of ridicule

your lyrics arent anything but rhetorical and far from literal

im too far advance for your infantile wordplay

that will have you drooling i should of brung a bib for you It's harder-hitting cuz you proved it when you dropped your verse

i know you just looking for something to bite

but these flows i produce dont put them in your mouth

ill have to call the poison center have ambulances at your house

the gravity of the situation will raise the mercury pretty decent use of wordplay... Mercury in therometers... The planet Mercury has more gravity...

after this lyrical execution they may charge me with first degree

if i catch you spitting any of my lines

im gonna treat this ic like my home and there's a burglary

Like I said, overall it was pretty standard, nothing mind-blowing from des, but he showed a better understanding of everything rap-wise. Flow, syllable formation, word choice, etc.

 

[thedesolateone]

ok dude changed his flow up after i put my verse down.

i win cuz dude cheated.

dude couldnt take it so he ad to try way harder.

i aint change shit see there are records stupid

i even went by your rules and didnt address your sexuality and i spit right away and i went first and you tryna play me smh

 

[The Smooth One]

@itzgrav...

I guess... lol... seems a lil flaw on your part. He might have "changed" his verse. But he didn't see your verse. And he obviously ain't change it that much, because you fed off his first line. You just sound whiny. Whatever he had before couldn't have been that much worse.

 

[ItzGravitation]

i aint change shit see there are records stupid

i even went by your rules and didnt address your sexuality and i spit right away and i went first and you tryna play me smh

na dude.

you stopped at that bib line.

then as i responded you added that other shit.

which cused me to not put forth the full effort.

I'm no fool dude.

I read your rap three times before i responded.

It changed as i typed mine.

 

[The Smooth One]

So basically you're saying he only had 8 bars when he said to write 16? And while you wrote yours he went back and added more? Still prior to your posting. Because either way, he had it up before you and didn't change anything after you. Frustrating because you didn't have more to feed off? Maybe, but idk bout grounds for DQ...

desolate... what say you?

 

[The Smooth One]

I do see a lotta edits but I dunno the history.

Side note: His first 8 bars still woulda got you imo.

 

[ItzGravitation]

we can try this again anothr day.

No add ons.

Once your verse is posted thats it.

 

[The Smooth One]

Were the rules always as stated? What was edited there, because that was done around the same time.

 

[The Smooth One]

Prolly should add the "no feeding" rule.. just a thought.

 

[ItzGravitation]

Were the rules always as stated? What was edited there, because that was done around the same time.

are you slow dude.

If dude do his vers and i start my verse and he change when i'm halfway done, how am i susposed to know he canged his verse?

point blank the shit aint right.

 

[P. Town]

My vote is for ItzGravitation simply because...

He went in right here!
"I push a nigga line back like a bad barber molest you like a bad father you go be one sad daughter.
I cant son you, you bitch, female dog.
I do Knuckle Echidna, Sonic the hedgehog.
We can go blow for blow, flow for flow, pound for pound
With Super Sonic heaters bullets travel at the speed of sound.
And I'm a COG soldier make the gears of war go round.
I smell pussy i'm a dog, bloodhound.
The king has been crowned, I astound, them goons surround
And like Chris Brown I take you down, we aint on common ground"

 

[Dakari]

des...

..............

 

[The Smooth One]

Am I slow? I'm fucking judging your verses, fall back. You right, technically it "isn't right"and if it's that serious DQ him. But I am asking fucking questions, and homeboy ain't respond yet, and this really ya'll shit to tend to.

And that also means you wrote twice what he did originally and it still wasn't as good. Just sayin. But he ain't confirm or deny beyond his first lil post so I was going off what I read and what made sense to a logical person. So again, fall back.

 

[ItzGravitation]

Am I slow? I'm fucking judging your verses, fall back. You right, technically it "isn't right"and if it's that serious DQ him. But I am asking fucking questions, and homeboy ain't respond yet, and this really ya'll shit to tend to.

And that also means you wrote twice what he did originally and it still wasn't as good. Just sayin. But he ain't confirm or deny beyond his first lil post so I was going off what I read and what made sense to a logical person. So again, fall back.

he did an edit i did an edit. but regardless, i could care less.

 

[thedesolateone]

na dude.

you stopped at that bib line.

then as i responded you added that other shit.

which cused me to not put forth the full effort.

I'm no fool dude.

I read your rap three times before i responded.

It changed as i typed mine.

i did stop at the bib line and left a comment that i wasnt finished because im at a library with a fifteen minute time limit so i posted to save what i already typed to pick it back up after the computer reset.anyway i never saw your verse at all before i said i was done and you have an advantage seeing my verse then going.where am i cheating then?

 

[thedesolateone]

So basically you're saying he only had 8 bars when he said to write 16? And while you wrote yours he went back and added more? Still prior to your posting. Because either way, he had it up before you and didn't change anything after you. Frustrating because you didn't have more to feed off? Maybe, but idk bout grounds for DQ...

desolate... what say you?

your exactly right with your insight.i am at a library .the only reason i posted was to saved my work because here there are 15 min time limits on computers.i even left a line telling him im not done.if this was really a pronblem why didnt he address it before the voting began?plus i didnt even see his verse at all and i left out the no feeding rule on purpose.if any thing i gave him a big advantage and now hes crying cause someone voted for me.i edited the rules so the voters would no what we agreed upon.

 

[thedesolateone]

des...

..............

you gotta leave an explanation or your vote doesnt count

 

[Migz.]

itzgravy for the same reasons as pdown...flow was basic but atleast it was coherent..and he went in better..

 

[thedesolateone]

itzgravy for the same reasons as pdown...flow was basic but atleast it was coherent..and he went in better..

thanks for voting