ItzGravitaion vs Desolateone(Again????)

[thedesolateone]

i wanna thank all the voters if you voted against me or not thanks for paying attention.

and good breakdowns from raw material and love yal.just a few more votes and we will go from there

 

[ItzGravitation]

cant believe this.
Do you ppl know what wordplay is?
My art is flawless.
If he didnt call me gay, dude wouldnt have much besides the oil spill line.
Somebody explain how i stole my swag from mexicans.

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

cant believe this.
Do you ppl know what wordplay is?
My art is flawless.
If he didnt call me gay, dude wouldnt have much besides the oil spill line.
Somebody explain how i stole my swag from mexicans.

I understand your fustration. It's hard to acept others opinion when you have faith in yourself
just keep it moving. I thought you won the first round, but your second verse just didn't hit hard as a battle rhyme. It wasn't very direct. That don't mean it was wack. I don't think your hearing anyone out, and you may be taking it a little too personal.

 

[ItzGravitation]

i'm not.
Disect the second verse for me.

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

i'm not.
Disect the second verse for me.

Where I'm from Texas, far from pathetic.
My seizure is diabetic cuz you swetter than some Nesquik.
Okay. That was cool. You sayin he makein you sick with his homo ways

I wreck shit I'm septic, My sickness is epic.
My grammar incorrect but my dick is the bestest.
I warned you dont test this, now i must destroy you.
Here you wasted two lines talkin bout yourself, the one line going at him was kinda weak, and you could have been talking to anyone

If you were on a streak this Halo, killjoy dude.
Watch me start a killing spree by you killing you who killing me?
I'm killing all til infinity, immortal cuz my divinity.
Ask your bitch if she devoted she on my dick religiously.
Once again..nice wordplay but, who are adressing? And the last two lines are about you.

You jack off you have no dignity, at least you have my sympathy.
I kill the verse with efficiency, efficiently, you differently.
Even at your hardest you could hardly put a dent in me.
Dont hate me cuz i'm handsome and the bitches love my swag.
Here every other line is about you, and the lines about TDO are IMO weak

All the niggas love a fag, your car note is my bag.
If you aint talking bout money you aint talking bout shit.
Idk about you but, I don't love fags...unless you talkin bout newports. Then what does "your car note is my bag" mean? Educate me. The next line is pure filler like you had nothing else to hit TDO wit. Money talk has nothing to do with a text battle.

You dummy i got tommy's that will make your stomach split.
this last line just is weak in my opinion

His verse wasn't much better but it was better...just my opinion.
Mater of fact everybody else voted the opisite of what I said.

 

[ItzGravitation]

ok dude. Even tho you didnt understand a few i respect your opinion

 

[deaththreats]

I say tie: My judgement comes down to round one vs. Round two. It's simple to me. Round one it's gravitation had more punches, and TDO's first five lines were his best in the punch department. I enjoyed TDO's structure vs gravitations simple flow...so in round one gravitations punches beat TDO's structure due to the fact I wasn't feelin 3 quarters of TDO's verse at all.

Roundr two? Things got worse. Gravitation was just spittin, and TDO started to feed off gravitations first verse. I guess it made it easy to put up some sort of defence. I saw nothing in the two verses that I could even say I liked. This single line got TDO the win for round two: leaving you leaking like an oil spill there will be blood you know the drill...more lines like that from either of you would have made it a better battle for me. Round two goes to TDO. Off that line alone. It's what I enjoyed the most of the last two verses.

Say fam...ya'll should be able to count my detailed (hell of a breakdown if I say so myself) vote if ya'll count this one...my vote was fully broken down, so it's a solid thought out vote, don't matter that my post game wasn't up enough

 

[thedesolateone]

cant believe this.

Do you ppl know what wordplay is?

My art is flawless.

If he didnt call me gay, dude wouldnt have much besides the oil spill line.

Somebody explain how i stole my swag from mexicans.

i will explain:cowboys front like they invented the hat and boots they wear and their is alot of cowboys from your hometown so you probaly wear cowboy shit . but really they jacked the style from mexicans.its a little history of shit you probably wear.i didnt expect everyone to get it but notice how my verse is structured about texas and notice how you say alot of rhymes that dont go anywhere and is filler then you will understand how you revealed you are from texas but seeminly for no reason just to rhyme.you are getting shot for swagger jackin the mexicans who dont get the credit they deserve for starting the cowboy style.just improve your writing and stop complaining.take it as a lesson.

 

[thedesolateone]

Say fam...ya'll should be able to count my detailed (hell of a breakdown if I say so myself) vote if ya'll count this one...my vote was fully broken down, so it's a solid thought out vote, don't matter that my post game wasn't up enough

you did a good breakdown but gravitation made the rules so we cant change them now .the post limits are so people wont make fake accounts and vote for themselves

 

[ItzGravitation]

i will explain:cowboys front like they invented the hat and boots they wear and their is alot of cowboys from your hometown so you probaly wear cowboy shit . but really they jacked the style from mexicans.its a little history of shit you probably wear.i didnt expect everyone to get it but notice how my verse is structured about texas and notice how you say alot of rhymes that dont go anywhere and is filler then you will understand how you revealed you are from texas but seeminly for no reason just to rhyme.you are getting shot for swagger jackin the mexicans who dont get the credit they deserve for starting the cowboy style.just improve your writing and stop complaining.take it as a lesson.

Mexicans didnt invent that shit.
And if they did they were still cowboys.
Nexico and Texas have alot of history

 

[thedesolateone]

Mexicans didnt invent that shit.

And if they did they were still cowboys.

Nexico and Texas have alot of history

they do have alot of history and you dont seem to know much of it.also i went in on how you are gay cause i didnt in our first battle because you made it a rule not to but i didnt wanna keep deescibin how you are gay so i made a verse going at you being from texas.

 

[ItzGravitation]

unless you from TX you cant tell me shit about TX history.
point being those lines were weak and you know it.

 

[thedesolateone]

unless you from TX you cant tell me shit about TX history.

point being those lines were weak and you know it.

you have a faulty logic.i read and conversate plus i dated a girl from texas before so i know a little about it.you assume i never been to texas and your right about that but i know a few people from there.my lines were very strong and strategic you were mostly just rhyming do you want me to breakdown our verses how i see it?alot of people say mine wasnt much better and that is ok but how i see it all my verses against you are way better but i just let the people vote and make their own decisions.its all opinions i actually thought some of your lines were pretty good that other people said was weak.i lmao when dude said niggas love a fag?i dont.but you saying my car note is your bag was decent to me because it doesnt always gotta be about hurting each other violently imo

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

you have a faulty logic.i read and conversate plus i dated a girl from texas before so i know a little about it.you assume i never been to texas and your right about that but i know a few people from there.my lines were very strong and strategic you were mostly just rhyming do you want me to breakdown our verses how i see it?alot of people say mine wasnt much better and that is ok but how i see it all my verses against you are way better but i just let the people vote and make their own decisions.its all opinions i actually thought some of your lines were pretty good that other people said was weak.i lmao when dude said niggas love a fag?i dont.but you saying my car note is your bag was decent to me because it doesnt always gotta be about hurting each other violently imo

I thought the your car note is my bag line was about fashion but I couldn't see it due to the fact I never seen a gay text mc....atleast not one who is out I still think the line was weak. I still(no pun intended) stand behind my vote.

 

[ItzGravitation]

the line weak cuz my bag cost more than dude carnote?

 

[raw-material_ahh]

I was going over the votes to see if this battled was wrapped to see if I should include it in the next update of the Records thread and I have:

Round 1
3-1 thedesolateone's way.

Round 2
3-1 thedesolateone's way too.

But deaththreats & b.c.o.dcru don't have 200 posts so according to your rules, their votes don't count which would make the votes look like this with the only votes counting as mine and love yal's:

Round 1
2-0 thedesolateone's way.

Round 2
2-0 thedesolateone's way too.

I'll sit back and wait to see what y'all decide.

 

[deaththreats]

you did a good breakdown but gravitation made the rules so we cant change them now .the post limits are so people wont make fake accounts and vote for themselves

That's real talk....my bad for not looking at the post count on the rules

 

[thedesolateone]

still need a few more votes to end this.i appeciate your input and time everyone

 

[thedesolateone]

still need a few more votes to end this.i appeciate your input and time everyone

so is a few more gonna vote so we can wrap this up or should i drop a third verse

 

[thedesolateone]

so did i win ?the peoples whos votes didnt count at first now have the post to qualify