is c of tranquility by canibus the greatest display of lyricism in hip hop history?

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thedesolateone;132998 said:
Fantastic rhyme mechanics, like that of a blind pianist,

The keys are metallic, my fingers are magnets,

The music is magic, WHAT IS THIS MADNESS!?

The stanzas are rites of passage,

Your left brain habits become your baggage,

That's pretty good.
 
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Question Authority;133009 said:
That's pretty good.

My shield is composed of meteorite stone,

My sword is honed from a red dragon's rib bones,

Rippin� and spittin�, basic complex combinatrix,

For the agents, tryna hack into my Matrix!

5 out of 10 cases are found with their heads hacked off,

In several places, hanging from metal braces,

Long ago, the ghost of Plato befriended me,

With a amulet intended to anchor my memories,
 
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thedesolateone;133120 said:
My shield is composed of meteorite stone,

My sword is honed from a red dragon's rib bones,

Rippin� and spittin�, basic complex combinatrix,

For the agents, tryna hack into my Matrix!

5 out of 10 cases are found with their heads hacked off,

In several places, hanging from metal braces,

Long ago, the ghost of Plato befriended me,

With a amulet intended to anchor my memories,

Pardon me, but I must beckon your attention for no more than several seconds

With the minor hypocritical questions,

Let�s say, I had to make an exception,

Where I complied to exhume a body for postmortem autopsy inspection,

I request the best yes-men,

That promptly recovered the radio frequency identification pin,

Then, trigger the transponder located under the skin

Of the deceased until it showed me a grid,

If that went over your head (HUH) then I'll be more than pleased to show you again,

But I must rescind, I have pressing matters to attend,

It's my wife's birthday & I can't be late for delivery

On her customized marble grey bidet, good day!
 
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I agree with most shit said in this thread. Canibus is too complex. That's why I wonder why his debut was so badly received. It displayed his ability to make cross-over tracks and even though album was uneven, it didn't deserve hate it got.
 
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real_hh_rep;137115 said:
I agree with most shit said in this thread. Canibus is too complex. That's why I wonder why his debut was so badly received. It displayed his ability to make cross-over tracks and even though album was uneven, it didn't deserve hate it got.

take rza beats or dre beats or havoc beats and put it under the lyrics and its a classic album
 
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Look into my eyes, I hypnotize my bride as I walk towards her,

The congregation wouldn't take they eyes off her!

I hear moans and weeping coupled with soft but labored breathing,

I pinch myself, AM I DREAMING?

Invisible people speaking, we've met, but I don't remember meeting,

I don't remember these traditional teachings!!

I know I'm reaching into unallowed boundaries, but the rhymes are increasing,

My mind is breaching, I find it pleasing!

Inside the theater of Bar War, unlimited seating,

the kills, still fresh, the cadavers, still bleeding!

The war drum pounds like the wings of a owl beating,

Right before it snares its prey & it begins feasting,

How nice of you to join me this evening,

To see the symphony for its surface complexity out of deep simplicity,

You see, I achieve tranquility with obscure metaphors,

Entering doors not placed between walls, but in the floor,
 
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canibus is a good rapper but i can only listen to him in lil doses at a time...sometimes i listen and im like ok bis went in on that and other times im like here we go with spaced out bullshit again...he can be entertaining and he can be very boring...its pot luck with him
 
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semi-auto-mato;138321 said:
canibus is a good rapper but i can only listen to him in lil doses at a time...sometimes i listen and im like ok bis went in on that and other times im like here we go with spaced out bullshit again...he can be entertaining and he can be very boring...its pot luck with him

Yo, scientists gather in a secret place to debate

They photographed the Earth from space and saw my face

They tried to translate the innate asiatic shape

before the final earthquakes came but it was too late

Only one eighth of the human race escaped to space

They were chased by flying phenomenon to the lunar base

Floatillas and space centers, lasers probed the entrance

DNA code sensors reject old genetics

I presented my cosmic clearance to a patrol of medics

I was injected with sodium pentathol and questioned

I relayed the message the way I was trained to remember it

I showed them the keypad code and told 'em to enter it

I told 'em which alphanumeric buttons were sensitive

He snatched it outta my hand and started depressing it

I told him detonation was definite if he kept at it

He never quit, he just lost his temper and flipped

I bowed my head like "I guess this is it"

My ears popped, the music stopped, and I couldn't hear shit
 
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thedesolateone;138351 said:
Yo, scientists gather in a secret place to debate
They photographed the Earth from space and saw my face
They tried to translate the innate asiatic shape
before the final earthquakes came but it was too late
Only one eighth of the human race escaped to space
They were chased by flying phenomenon to the lunar base
Floatillas and space centers, lasers probed the entrance
DNA code sensors reject old genetics
I presented my cosmic clearance to a patrol of medics
I was injected with sodium pentathol and questioned
I relayed the message the way I was trained to remember it
I showed them the keypad code and told 'em to enter it
I told 'em which alphanumeric buttons were sensitive
He snatched it outta my hand and started depressing it
I told him detonation was definite if he kept at it
He never quit, he just lost his temper and flipped
I bowed my head like "I guess this is it"
My ears popped, the music stopped, and I couldn't hear shit

see this is exactly what im talking about...spaced out bullshit
 
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thedesolateone;112293 said:
he still is pushing the boundaries.study the song and tell me im wrong and why?he is on lord byron and shakeperian levels .

why wouldnt u link the song??? ... embed a damn youtube u lazy bastid LOL
 
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UPTOWN (CONNEXX);138711 said:
why wouldnt u link the song??? ... embed a damn youtube u lazy bastid LOL

my sincere apologies but i dont know how to embed.on the bright side this gets people to look at the bars
 
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[video=youtube;kWMemN1gT0g]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWMemN1gT0g[/video]

desolateone ... i hate you

LOL
 
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UPTOWN (CONNEXX);138792 said:
[video=youtube;kWMemN1gT0g]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWMemN1gT0g[/video]

desolateone ... i hate you

LOL

thanks a trilly a trilly a fucking quintilly
 
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Baphomet's unintelligible intelligence is benevolent!!

The initiate magician, not ready but willing,

To perform molecular fission with emotions & feelings,

I stand before the Rabbi with cat-eyes, HE LOOKED HIGH!

I don't mind, the muthafucka look crazy all the time,

He asked me for the wedding band, I gave him the bride�s severed hand,

PUNISHMENT FOR TOUCHING ANOTHER MAN!!

I'm just a poor shoe cobbler from Guadalajara,

Who came in contact with scholars that studied Qabalah,

I do not wish to be a martyr & follow the footsteps of my father,

I want to live the live of a �honest farmer�,
 
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Canibus used to be my favorite emcee when i was younger until i grew up and realized his songs had zero point and that he rapped about nothing, Rip the Jacker is a definite classic in my opinion but that has more to do with Stoupe being a beast behind the boards than Canibus' rhyming on the album i think
 
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Canibus is over-rated, IMO.

He's technically interesting, but his subject matter is so unnatural and psuedo-intellectual/scientist-esque.

Just my opinion though.
 
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These rhymes resemble knots being tied to time lines,

Becomes a nonlinear noose that will snap your mind,

FIRST! Sever your spine, SECOND! Normal M configurations

Are dismembered and disconnected, very unpleasant,

My third effort employs absurd ethics,

Kangaroo execution court is in session after dawn, but before breakfast,

Expert effective mass burial method so well measured

It's impressive and intensive, not to mention expensive,

Extensive templates taken from all global nano-industrial sectors,

No wonder I'm so aggressive at Tetris,
 
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