in my mind, he was you...

[VSOP]

whhhhhaaattt???!!? damn jay---you on the other side of the mirror of my relationship huh? lol straight up lol i read this shit through twice-GREAT piece, you know ya boy can relate

keep droppin that fucked up relationship shit that we call love *as real p would say*

 

[Tupacfan]

LOL at vsop's comments..

Aye j,

This was nice, I feel it with my previous relationship... I was just a miserable as the relationship and glad I had let it go..

Keep expressing yourself, and I'm sure its thearpy for the heart

 

[VSOP]

and stop bein the female version of me lol that might help

"poppa raised a playa, so playa---i played her"

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

lol jay you is the truth...the way you went in on this piece is something amazing...got the vibe of a woman wanting out and a man misunderstanding a woman's worth...plus the emotions carry through the lines brought me on edge of my seat...bottom line good work as always

keep droppin the lines of second doubt and a visual escape called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[jayy.prime]

thanks for the props folks..just had a major need to vent, and forced it all out in this piece..vsop, i'm the female version of you? hmm..i can definitely see it...remind me to never get into it with you, we may just kill each other..haa...jk jk...anywho, thanks again for the props guys..just needed a release for the heartache..and as always, this was the perfect spot.