I'm not a poet or nothing but I wrote this a month ago thought I'd see what you think

[Silverfoxxx]

Good shit fam, I write anytime to deal with my issues too. This shit is a great way to relase stress .

 

[Esiam]

Thanks man

 

[Tupacfan]

this was a decent drop, for somebody who don't write much, or consider themself a poet.. I honestly believe everybody has a poet in them.. just gotta implement all the tools..

But i enjoyed reading this, and i hope to see you grow poetically right chere'!!!

keep em' coming!

thanks for sharing too,

Peace!

 

[Esiam]

Alright thanks tbh I'm not sure if I can grow poetically, I mean I don't see it as a problem, I don't plan on becoming a poet or nothing it's just venting really for me, like when I write I just write, like the shits just write themselves I start with something and then I end somewhere, sometimes I try to wrap it all together by reusing portions from one line in the other like usually the first returns somehow in the last, to make it sort of a neverending circle, other than that I don't think much when I write

 

[costy88]

you are really talented. I like it

 

[Tupacfan]

Alright thanks tbh I'm not sure if I can grow poetically, I mean I don't see it as a problem, I don't plan on becoming a poet or nothing it's just venting really for me, like when I write I just write, like the shits just write themselves I start with something and then I end somewhere, sometimes I try to wrap it all together by reusing portions from one line in the other like usually the first returns somehow in the last, to make it sort of a neverending circle, other than that I don't think much when I write

your most welcome.. and that's okay. you can share your writing here with us if you like.. if that's what you can do to vent, go on ahead lol.. most of us usually turn to something to vent out frustrations and anger or emotions for that matter..and writing is thee best outlet...

Peace.

 

[Esiam]

you are really talented. I like it

Thanks, I appreciate that!

 

[tmilly]

One step closer to God, two steps away from you

Three steps away from knowing what to do in the fourth quarter

That's my favorite part right there. Really clever, easy to connect with, at least for me.