I wrote a 200 bars. What you think?

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The day I push down instead of lifting up.

Is the day of my understanding I give up,

The day I do not give respect from those who give respect, is the day my mind is cracked,

That day, yes another one fears,

Is the day of God, I duck,


bars...or more, poetry...

some sort of psalm?
 
supergangster;9207561 said:
Ok part 2. Spittin some true knowledge. From the heart.

Fear ! .

Fear of being alone. Fear of checking themselves in the mirror . Fear to live with himself. Fear live with his conscience.

Fear of being self-critical .

People are afraid of themselves . Self-hate ! . Therefore, you will see people adapt to what the majority think , diving into the cultures changing styles, changing personalities , pointing fingers and chopping loyal people in the back . Everything for them not to be alone with themselves. Why ? they are afraid to be alone with their conscience , afraid of being themselves, as long as you are afraid of being yourself , you remain a slave to others. Teach you to love humans learn to love yourself. Then you can talk of freedom

thank God for all the trials and all the setbacks I've had , and meet through life. All affected fake people I 've met and all victims ( negative energy ) I encounter daily.

All injustice I have seen and experienced. Friends who passed away.

Everything good you have given me all the the time . Laughter . All you spoiled me with .the roof, food. Good people I've met . Inspiration . My health even though I have braved it through the years. My physics arms, legs , eyes, ears

Conscience that has always been there. Humility will power .

All you have given me has shaped me into a conscious and strong man thanks God for everything you have given and continue to give me . With ups and downs . Thank God for you always , and is where all time and for all time. God is the greatest

You kicked some real shit but this isn't rapping at all
 
supergangster;9207581 said:
Busta Carmichael ;9207564 said:
Quick question tho. Are you doing spoken word or are you trying to spit some bars?

True knowledge.

I innerstand

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Vamoose, you wack to me

Take them rhymes back to the factory

I see the gimmicks, the wack lyrics

The shit is depressing, pathetic.

Please forget it

Your mad cause my style you're admiring

Don't be mad, ups is hiring
 
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