Freestyle thread.

[junegemini]

*shits on*

*drops mic*

 

[DarcSkies777]

*shits on*

*drops mic*

[Big Pun Voice] PPPpppppppppppppppppppp!!!!!! Shiiiiiiid on the whole internet! [/BIG PUN VOICE]

 

[John_Blazini]

yo............... yo check 1 check 2 yo....................... i be like................. yo.... I

shit I lost it bring the beat back.

 

[Bwoahmizzee]

this thread don't even deserve a post from me

but you should be happy I didn't post for free

 

[Cleveland7venty6]

i never freestyle for free without chargin niggaz a fee, it'll cost a brain cell just to cypher with me.

(only real hiphop heads know that.)

that nigga also said:

"im the illest lyricist in america, m.c's cant see me cuz im took quick for the human retina to registah..." (register)

 

[Keez Of NFBM]

See I got Frozen scramblin' like the Denver Broncos Tim Tebow

When my glocks get fired like the Chicago Bulls Vinny Del Negro

Four bars worth of material is all that 'Keez will ever need indeed

To show Fro' who's a true pro, you'll never succeed

 

[Tha Killa]

Do any of you think you can shit on me? A sample:

My presence commands respect like a reverend/
I give painful memories a life sentence/
From my thrown which sits on top of the heavens/
My patience allows for constant elevation/
I shit on peasants, as a way to teach lessons/
My foundation is a creation of a new frustration/
For your mind, and to give your bitch temptation/
A mastermind on the grind deceiving mankind/
Combined with a click to leave haters blind/
My flows create fear in the minds of foes/
Fantasies of your blood an piss stained clothes/
I will stop your show, turn out your hoes/
Than leave you wishing it was just a broken nose/

I never thought I'd say this, but I would own you in a keystyle battle. You ain't s'posed to wax poetic in a keystyle man, you s'posed to be clever with your metaphors and witty with your similies. You're supposed to be a linguist amongst illiterates. This is just awful for a battle rap.

With that said, as a regular keystyle, you can use some work on your rhyme scheme, your flow, delivery, and metaphors are all kinda flat, but with some practice you can be pretty dope in no time.