For a Hip-Hop head does my bars suck?

[_Goldie_]

Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

 

[angrymaninc]

Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

pretty much...

 

[bankrupt baller]

um.....riiiiiiiggggggghhhhhhhtttttttt

 

[msmusick]

Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.

 

[_Goldie_]

Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.

No problem, now drop that proof pic

 

[msmusick]

Lol I should've figured eventually I'd be asked for validation. I'm technologically incompetent so here's my facebook link
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100000691996309

 

[BlackAX410]

yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway

 

[msmusick]

yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway

Thanks for the welcome. I've been checkin' out this sight for a minute so I figured what the heck. Might as well join.

 

[SnowBunnySmanger]

Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

 

[msmusick]

Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.

 

[_Goldie_]

Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.

Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox

 

[msmusick]

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Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox[/quote]

I'm not sure how that's why I was hoping that the link would work

 

[loch121]

Not bad at all

 

[msmusick]

Not bad at all

Thanks!

 

[Florence52]

. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.

 

[raprite]

Here's something

“Where did it all go wrong”

Its tough when you’re on top, then you start your drop

Imperfections, dirty spots, big cracks in the rock, find out

You’re no longer the man on the block

Cold slap in the face, don’t look so shocked

We had it all, we had it cod locked

Look at us now, what the hell’s going on

Somebody please tell me where the fuck’d we go wrong

Behaviors contagious, no matter how outrageous

Like hating with rage, making slaves for your trade

Putting weed smokers in cages, fucking rich getting ageless

Aint there anyone out there to gauge this

Aint there anyone there that can step up to the plate

And save us

Fuck I can’t tell you how bad that I hate this

Someone please tell me what the fuck’s going on

Someone please tell me where the fuck’d we go wrong

Chorus

Don’t make any sense

We had it good for so long

Somebody please tell me what’s going on

Faith in a Nation that once was strong

Somebody please tell me where it all went wrong

Just a few years back, seemed we were on track

Eastern Europe had began to crack, then just like that

The Berlin wall came crashing down

Commies seemed to be coming around

Peace it seemed was the new kid in town

Well we can’t have that, a small scale attack

Then just like that, we’re back on track

Fuck that peace, we’ll find a new home in the Middle East

New place for fun for the fucking guns and the bombs

Find a new place for our troops to call home

Where homesick boys can write home to their Moms

Won’t matter to much if they lose their legs and their arms

Plenty more where they come from back home on the farm

Can anyone please tell me what’s going on

Somebody please, where the fuck’d we go wrong

Greed has its needs and it feeds and it feeds

Fulfills its hunger off of you and off me

Give me fucking amnesty from this Goddamn

Beast or I swear by God you’ll see someone bleed

We’ve had it, who planted this fucking seed

Somebody tell me what the hell’s going on

Somebody tell me where the fuck we went wrong

Chorus

Seems this shit just gets worse and worse and worse

Drive this whole administration to work in a hearse

They grab your dick and they jerk and they jerk

Circle of fucking jerks gone berserk

Sit behind their desks and they lurk and they lurk

Want your fucking pants your shoes and your shirt

Want you to lose what they know you deserve

Want you to choose what you know they don’t deserve

Would someone tell me what the hell’s going on

Can somebody tell me where the fuck we went wrong

You don’t pass goal, you fucking go to jail

Unless your part of this big business cartel

Can’t borrow from a friend cause he’s just like you

Government won’t take a fuckin IOU

It’ Hooray for me and fuck you too

Dumb ass should have went to business school

Today’s for me and tomorrow is too

Guess I’ll just wish you the best of luck fool

Lucks all you get and you’ll need it too

Cause it’s my job to fuck you and fuck you, fuck you

Fuck you and fuck you, fuck you and fuck you

Fuck you

RapRite 2012

 

[supYo]

no, its dope

 

[LUClEN]

 

[Cmon_Son]

Yes.

 

[Doubleday4life]

I like homies written a couple posts down!