"Everytime (I See You)" Written by: AK.aPHillYisILL

[Tupacfan]

Awww, congrads on baby number 2!

At least you got to vent, and hopefully its not so hostile between ya'll now, for the sake of Cali..

The chorus kind of grabbed my attention..

Thanks for sharing! True real life shit right here I see! Props for shariing with the masses!

Peace!.

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

Awww, congrads on baby number 2!

At least you got to vent, and hopefully its not so hostile between ya'll now, for the sake of Cali..

The chorus kind of grabbed my attention..

Thanks for sharing! True real life shit right here I see! Props for shariing with the masses!

Peace!.

Thanks! Appreciate it. Nah me and my lil girls mama butt heads every now and then. I can't stand her. But i'm with someone else, going on two years and i'm glad i'm with her. Like I said, the only thing my ex ever did that was great to me, is my kid.

What part of the chorus grabbed your attention? I'd like to know. Thanks for the positive feedback though!!!

 

[Tupacfan]

my bad, I meant the 3rd verse.. The chorus was ehh..

But the last verse was catching in terms of how it flowed.. But I also think you could had done better lyrically..

Over all its a good read..

Peace!

 

[Tupacfan]

but u can always do better tho..

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

True. I just didn't want to go over the top. I just put this one up because it's not as explicit as the other couple of ones i've wrote about my ex. It was suppose to be about my hatred towards my ex and then my daughter got put in there and it became about her and how much I love her. So I meant to make it about my hate for her mom and how I love my daughter. When I see her, my love for my daughter is stronger than the hate that I have for her mother. And in the end my lil girl is the only thing that matters... I don't know. That's what I was trying to get out. Appreciate your opinion though!

 

[QB - 6th Edition]

yea good shit AK

 

[Tupacfan]

Well, I thank you for sharing that experience with us indeed, glad you could put into words then go off on cali's mom. And it's all about the child now, non of ya'll matter so yea.. keep writing and expressing your self..