Dreams - By Tupacfan

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soooo weird..i just dropped one called "a dream" .....strrrangggeee.....lol...but i've always found your pieces very clean and simply...for lack of a better word, beautiful....you have a great talent, you're work is well put together, clean and beautiful to read..(thanks for the props on my joint by the way) bottom line..i love ur work...keep it up miss lady!
 
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WOW @ your "i dream for love, for purpose" line

you still got it mama-GREAT read

i always learn new words when i read your joints lol its like listenin to canibus
 
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Aww...Thanks for the wonderful comment Jay! you know it means a lot when you get feed back from other fellow poets and I appreciate your's because your always on point with your material and sub par, always felt and just solid with it too. Yea I notice your topic too! I read it and felt inspired to write one of em jawn's like that lol.

Aye VSOP,

It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..
 
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tupacfan;477561 said:
Aye VSOP,

It always an honor to have my material with the alikes of canibus, a walking dictionary or thesaurus lol.. That's love yo! preciate that..

lol no doubt mama-thats why i like readin everyones pieces on here cuz i learn a new word or idea that i gotta run with
 
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callingmachine;488867 said:
Thank you for sharing your poem, it made my day, and really hope to read some more soon, cheers.

No, Thank you for reading my poem! Glad I could make your day with this drop.. and keep dropping by, I will have some new material posted in due time. Thanks for reading as well.

Cheers back to you!
 
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This poem is still relevant for me..

Choke choke.. My dreams are so afar,
further than a shining star,
still bleeding from all my deep scars,
From fighting many wars,
that rage further than the deserts of Qu'tar.....

To be continued.....
 
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That’s one of my many countless dreams

While they remain unfilled

I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell

As my dreams don’t come in refills

It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s

Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel

Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail

Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,

but waiting for it to be felt

Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody

But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...
 
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deaththreats;1997483 said:
That’s one of my many countless dreams
While they remain unfilled
I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell
As my dreams don’t come in refills
It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s
Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel
Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail
Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,
but waiting for it to be felt
Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody
But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

The WHOLE poem is good, but this is my favorite part..I know this poem is from way back, but after I seen your battles its crazy how you able to write something like this too so I had to post my 2 cents on it...

Thanks for dropping in and reading some of my material..

I'm a poet, not a battler.. But I do dabble with freestyle battles and stuff like that. I have that hate and love relationship with poetry and i feel I needed to take a break for a minute so its why I joined the tourney.. But def do get use to seeing me in future battles over in LE.. Its a new journey and I'm loving it..
 
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tupacfan;454461 said:
So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.

Dreams

While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness

Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured

The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to

take my last breath.

I had to wish upon the farthest star

Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality

From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity

Were just another causality of America’s hostility

Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.

Philosophizing why all these children are dying

A conception that I’m still not understanding.

The dream I’m reflecting

Is the opposite of my perspectives.

A world with no affliction but affection

Kids receiving parental attention

The hopeless overcoming life’s exception

And fulfilling expectations.

A place where unity and peace exists

with plenty of food to eat

people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.

Less inequality so there’s equality

A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of

Letting justice be laws of morals and principals

However I don’t see that inevitable.

I dream for love, for purpose

And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth

Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life

So tell me how should a women live?

A petroglyph on a rock.

That’s one of my many countless dreams

While they remain unfilled

I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell

As my dreams don’t come in refills

It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s

Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel

Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail

Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,

but waiting for it to be felt

Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody

But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

- 2pacfan

Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.
 
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MeTaL;2021249 said:
Get material I like it, it has a lot of compassion, self projection, thus an informative approach of reality "While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness" That was dope right there. Good stuff.

Aye Metal,

thanks for taking the time to peep this jawn right here.. and you know that's my favorite line too.. fa real..

peace..
 
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Tupacfan;24509 said:
So folks, this piece was inpired by another poet shout outs to Prophet, it was written a way's back but never shared it with the masses and yesterday I was going thru some of my material and thought I share this one with ya'll.

Dreams

While I don’t await for darkness, I dream into far consciousness

Courageous for the unwanted timeless endured

The last I had infer my dreams, was when I thought I was ready to

take my last breath.

I had to wish upon the farthest star

Realizing my dream is to afar from actuality

From all the mortality of humanity due to animosity

Were just another causality of America’s hostility

Where tragedy is another man’s comedy.

Philosophizing why all these children are dying

A conception that I’m still not understanding.

The dream I’m reflecting

Is the opposite of my perspectives.

A world with no affliction but affection

Kids receiving parental attention

The hopeless overcoming life’s exception

And fulfilling expectations.

A place where unity and peace exists

with plenty of food to eat

people shouldn’t have to sleep with empty stomachs.

Less inequality so there’s equality

A place where racism and prejudice is never herd of

Letting justice be laws of morals and principals

However I don’t see that inevitable.

I dream for love, for purpose

And I dream a vandal would chisel me off this earth

Because that for me is death, or because that for me is life

So tell me how should a women live?

A petroglyph on a rock.

That’s one of my many countless dreams

While they remain unfilled

I re-visit them when life’s to hard to tell

As my dreams don’t come in refills

It only rebuilds my wills in over coming my ill’s

Dreaming of places where it takes me away from life’s feel

Healing me in places where I couldn’t prevail

Unveiling the true happiness that no ones hasn’t felt,

but waiting for it to be felt

Making my heart melt like a symphony and leaving it with sweet melody

But yet this is just another fantasy awaiting for it to be reality.

- 2pacfan

By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

 
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By prophet which username.... I'm hoping not Yahweh profet???

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Na, I'm sure its a different poet.
 
Zoom zoom im racing escaping this reality grasping no concept calamity ive fallen cant get up mind altering steps faltering.Chasing a dream i think i fell and missedKiss of death times up no hope left so i turn the page ink stains my hands my hands they itch money green like yo bitch when she see meAint got shit to say cant beat me my mouth dont run but my hands they walk so ill walk on her face make her rethink twice bout swinging my waySidetracked i switch lanes back on it cant shake this thang my future calling but i wont answer still got messages from the past i left last present aint left yet so why talk to the future when my present still relevanyI teach a speech of a million words insults unheard of my insides they burn up see why they call me fiyah bc my flow hard and i burn hotter the more i write the harder i fightMy haters they motivate help me create let the words escape a destination unknown but in solice it will find homeIngrained n the membrane forever and alw!

ays so i treat the beat like a reverend and i praise it giving a voice to the voiceless choice to the choiceles

 

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