Do You Think This Is A Decent Verse?

[Antwuan89]

you in your 40's bruh?

Nope! 24

 

[Antwuan89]

you rap like a nigga from the 80's bruh....in one of your bars you say

You Can See Me Making Records Chillin' With The Niggas In The Hallway



No bruh....just...No

Its Just Bars...

I Had Put That To Got With The Next Line.

 

[qawshun]

you should've just made a youtube vid and put that up

 

[Ranxx]

is english your first language bro?

 

[Built 4 cuban linx]

No

 

[Antwuan89]

is english your first language bro?

Yes!

 

[Ranxx]

is english your first language bro?

Yes!

 

[Peezy_Jenkins]

from reading it, it looks like it would sound dated as hell if recorded

 

[CashmoneyDux]

Will this song be on the A side or B side of your mixtape?

 

[Lab Baby]

I mean, it's not wack, you got your point across. But it seems you kinda just wrote down whatever popped in your head at the moment. If that's the case, take more time to write, you never know what you could come up with with a few extra seconds of thought.

 

[32DaysOfInfiniti]

Pretty wack dawg... "Man I Kicks The Mad Flow In Front Of The Whole Peeps"

 

[thedesolateone]

no,that verse really sucks ass.

 

[LOLCL]

You can find me in the park after dark spitting rhymes

Year is 1983, but I'm classic with time,

Probably chilling in the project, sipping that brew,

Come on IC, tell me how this verse do,

OHHh shit

 

[Negro_Caesar]

This nigga is trollin. I can see it

 

[BenjaminE]

Stopped reading at "Yo! Uhh!"

You typin dawg... why you checkin the mic?

 

[T. Sanford]

Illmatic like flow

 

[FyHunnit]

 

[RickyRich]

you 24 and still trying to rap. Stop it five