Define Real

[Tupacfan]

WOW!

I like this..

these lines just stuck like a muthafucka...

a walking exclamation point

big letter b with no italicizing my degree

it's just the god in me

trying to make it into heaven while anticipating 2012

lasso the comet to crash on this god awful place

full of lack of moral and disgrace

kids in skinny jeans and pop guns

while girls are giving it free

back in my days pussy was as hard to get

as a number to call it

its a frigging shame

no decency or puns to describe this thing

nowadays its cool to be a fool

pants on the ground gold teeth smiling

doing the moonwalk and ditch to flee

but i vow to be different and ready to stand

for what I believe in

its deceiving that once i accepted my new found glory

fans are quick to leave

your always spittin the real, and that's what i love about your poetry! good job on expressing everything in this piece.

and you ain't lying, folks been flocking to WTE.. shoot i remember at one time last year it was just a few of us.. we need VSOP back in this bitch and lace us with some of that potent shit he be dropping..

and honsetly, ya'll (you and VSOP) have inspired me to be a better writer, always dropping gems and making me step up my word game lol.

Anways peace out and stick around..

 

[VSOP]

im here im here

good read P-like she said-those lines said it all, on some superman stand for somethin and put the world on ya shoulders type shit

motivatin me to get back on the grind

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

thanks for the props yall

@ tupacfan

awww lol i try....if it wasn't for this place i would literally fall apart on the real....its so therapeutic to drop whats in ya heart without any boundaries...hell most "poet" sites its all about tradition and thats something i fail to see...i go by emotions and inspiration...so i just do what i do lol

but really you inspire me to step my vocab up lol...the lines you be droppin be mind boggling delicious lol...and the vivid images you display through words leave me speechless

its all love on here thoe...thats why i love this place...it feels more like a family than a bunch of people jotting down shit to get recognition

 

[TheHarlemCrusader]

Thats H-HAWT! FIYAH!

 

[Tupacfan]

thanks for the props yall

@ tupacfan

awww lol i try....if it wasn't for this place i would literally fall apart on the real....its so therapeutic to drop whats in ya heart without any boundaries...hell most "poet" sites its all about tradition and thats something i fail to see...i go by emotions and inspiration...so i just do what i do lol

but really you inspire me to step my vocab up lol...the lines you be droppin be mind boggling delicious lol...and the vivid images you display through words leave me speechless

its all love on here thoe...thats why i love this place...it feels more like a family than a bunch of people jotting down shit to get recognition

yea emotions and inspiration defintely drives you to write heart felt pieces. Good to know i inspire you to step your vocab game.. I try and put in effort lol..

thanks for sharing this piece again.

Peace out!

 

[TheCATthatdidntDIE]

i like it dude. got everything i feel in that poem and then some. thats what poetry is to me, a mind tryin to connect to others through emotion (or lack thereof)