Deception

[Tupacfan]

This was a nice piece but an unfortunate situation, I could apprecaite the fact that you shared this with us as well.

I thought the word play was on point, the last stanza's hit pretty hard.. it gave me an image of your expression..

Good job in expressing and shedding light on your experience.

Keep writin and I'mma keep readin

 

[Rocket Kidd]

thanx for the feedback