Check out my song "Kill Like A Government"! - Underground Chicago Rap!!

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shit goes pretty hard man, i like the concept of the song.. you dont see very many people trying to say something now days good work on the message n shit..
 
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This is the type of cinematic flow that doesnt stretch the truth. Simps wouldnt understand this. The industry will never be ready for this type of content

5/5
 
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Im feeling the concept and lyrics. overall its good, but sometime during the second verse it just seemed like some dude yelling at me almost like ya flow dont match up with the beat
 
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I can dig it. Your voice reminds me of Method Man slightly, but that's not a bad thing. Easy on the ears. Great effort!
 
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word, thanks guys, hit me with more feedback / subscribe on youtube and help support me!

-Third War
 
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I like the concept,

you went in with the lyrics & i like the flow you hadd for the song over all

i feel you just need some more work on the delivery

stay up
 
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Thanks a lot man! Yeah, I've been working on delivery a lot. Been doing a lot of practicing lately, I think you'll notice a big difference in the next mixtape that I'll be dropping fairly soon.

-Third War
 
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@RuffDraft, if you're reading this, I tried sending you a private message but it said your inbox was full. I just wanted to say thanks a lot for moving it to a more appropriate place, and you guys got some badass forums going here.

-Third War
 
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