can you guys rate my freestyle i need good feedback on how good i am

[SunflowaSeeds]

Never interfere of intertwin.

 

[killarenzo]

ok

 

[killarenzo]

ok

 

[killarenzo]

thx for the feedback plap

 

[p-tavern]

+1 for coming off the top for the most part

-3 for not making a porpoise reference

 

[The BAPHOMET]

did you tell the hype man to shut up.......nigga was like uhhh huh uhhh, and my dude was like "hol up hol up let me finish stop that nigga let me finish".....lmfao........thats gone be a new hook........."let me switch my flow up hol up hol up wait I aint Biggie"

 

[SneakDZA]

+1 for the second time i heard "zoinks!" used in a rap.

-10 for turning the fucking camera sideways. if your name isn't O-Dog you should be using the proper orientation of your phone to record videos.

 

[killarenzo]

thx for the feedback

 

[p-tavern]

-2 for claiming you said it thrice when in reality you only said it twice. That aint keepin it real

-6 for drinking water in a frat house. BEER ONLY ARGH ARGH ARGH

+3 for having what may be a sea shell sitting off to the side. I like the beach. Make a conch shell horn sound your trademark intro

 

[killarenzo]

thx but that aint a frat house thats my room fam lol

 

[Mdizzle9000]

wack

 

[finafloe]

Naw u cant really rap

 

[John_Blazini]

if Aquina says you're wack i gotta ride with the BOSS

 

[The Prodigalson]

Shit was turrible yo. I can't focks with that.

 

[p-tavern]

Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens.

 

[killarenzo]

i jus started writing songs thts a freestyle

 

[killarenzo]

thx for the feedback

 

[Kimi]

Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 

[killarenzo]

ok

 

[MrSoutCity]

Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^