R Rouge Tha Mysfyt New member Jun 17, 2015 #1 it was coo....i think delivery would play a great deal on the capacity of dopeness
G grYmes New member Jun 20, 2015 #2 The message is there honestly it's just what you do with it to make yourself stand out. I remember writing like this when I just started. Try adding a bit more detail and expand on it some more. The foundations there tho.
The message is there honestly it's just what you do with it to make yourself stand out. I remember writing like this when I just started. Try adding a bit more detail and expand on it some more. The foundations there tho.
5 5onblackhandside New member Jun 20, 2015 #3 Niggas sounding like green eggs and ham Dr. Suess ass niggas.
W willywanker New member Jun 21, 2015 #4 Thanks for the feedback guys, yep delivery will be vital with a style like this, been experimenting with different styles lately.
Thanks for the feedback guys, yep delivery will be vital with a style like this, been experimenting with different styles lately.
W willywanker New member Jun 21, 2015 #5 Plus the last line was rushed I was stoned and just wanted to post something, got some heat in my notebook but don't wanna post incase it gets stolen.
Plus the last line was rushed I was stoned and just wanted to post something, got some heat in my notebook but don't wanna post incase it gets stolen.
T Tupacfan Moderator Aug 3, 2015 #9 Keep rapping, You ain't ready cause ya flow wack I can tell you tryna be the next white rapper, Listen to my boy cappa- dona, I'm from the state we call zona!
Keep rapping, You ain't ready cause ya flow wack I can tell you tryna be the next white rapper, Listen to my boy cappa- dona, I'm from the state we call zona!
