Breathe

[Tupacfan]

I never recognized you here, but welcome back!

I thought this was an interesting topic, I wish you had done more with it, in terms of stretching the poem some more because it was like a hiku..

I enjoyed reading tho, anything poetic I enjoy reading regardless the lack of substance..

neways keep writing..

Peace!

 

[shawty_stunnagrl]

haha yea its been a while since ive been here. and thanx. this poem won me alot. i just never responded intime to the stuff or it would have been published too.

 

[Tupacfan]

O yea, that's wassup..

I'll be looking forward to your presence here..

O, and ur welcome for the feedback too!