Battle Raps

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Wiirdo;2155439 said:
9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2

Let's have a wet t-shirt contest, make that shit see through,

You accrue a crew, and my new song gets another great review,

It takes a nation of billions just to attempt what we do,

And more importantly what I do, you getting dyslexic, why dude?,

It's simple you owe me so write me an OIU, don't lie dude,

Don't blow a gasket, cos If I blow you're in a casket,

You're just a case of basket, balling, till you falling,

Don't be name calling that shit's appalling,

Don't be dissing, you reputation up the wall you're pissing,

Shut the fuck up before you be reported missing,

On a milk carton, cos I'm like rap's doorman,

Kick you in a hole like a Spartan, I'm not a squadron,

There ain't 300 there's just one of me,

And trust me you don't want none of me

this is a good verse much props
 
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i was givin up props on those two lines
i was reading this whole thread to see if i missed any ill bars
and i came across those two lines of your verse
your latest verses were mediocre thats why you got no recognition
i was waitin for you to drop better verses
i know you can spit better than the verse i gave props to
i hold you to a higher standard of writing and flowing and skillful rhymin
than wiirdo
 
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thedesolateone;2891065 said:
i was givin up props on those two lines
i was reading this whole thread to see if i missed any ill bars
and i came across those two lines of your verse
your latest verses were mediocre thats why you got no recognition
i was waitin for you to drop better verses
i know you can spit better than the verse i gave props to
i hold you to a higher standard of writing and flowing and skillful rhymin
than wiirdo

Oh. well now I feel like an asshole lol.

I think the reason my shit is becoming mediocre is because I'm trying to become radio-friendly. Nobody wants to hear shit like those 2 bars on the radio, nahmean? I'm starting to get in the studio so I can get my shit on the radio and that means I have to cater my lyrics a certain way. Eventually I'll become skilled enough to appeal both fanbases simulataneously but until then, money >>>> internet reputation you feel me? I'm tryna eat out here doin' what I love ya dugg
 
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thedesolateone;2891386 said:
you have any recent song recorded?

http://snd.sc/ifo8O1

I'm not satisfied with that performance, but I was rushed, this was my 2nd take with minimal rehearsal time. I plan on going back in the booth probably Tuesday though.
 
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iMpIoDez;2891438 said:
http://snd.sc/ifo8O1

I'm not satisfied with that performance, but I was rushed, this was my 2nd take with minimal rehearsal time. I plan on going back in the booth probably Tuesday though.

i liked that recording you was killin that beat dope flow
good delivery good luck on recordin it again
 
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Nothing serious, they think they can attack
Yo that style is wack, without trying
Yo son, what every lines you deliver, is slack
Oh well, Implementing mang I don't know if you
Can flow, you too much full of jokes
Darn what's the comedy channel with out you
People just try to hard, get yo focus, and communicate
Your flow neva build case for changes, or navigate transition
And they get envy, when not even trying to flow
The high performane is normal, this Indian Iceland, you need
Mo creation, you should start work back yo deliverable involve union!
 
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Look it here
Its the North pole
Finest, yeah you think you cold
You probly are, wicky wacky
Alignment lines uza type gets crazy
Listen hazy dumb last dumber, you lazy
They say you tried to be bravely
Now everyone talking, its cowardly no harmly
Rhymes no lines, people just diss for fun
I wonder if its friendly or is midpoints the enemy
Non those of recycle ceo prend to be,
U lost with dirty syllables, they leave you down days of 30
Not surprisingly, get handicapped, same time get caught
Slow capabilities, your data has no more suggestion, like low quality!
 
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Componet whether if they good or not

Still capable to lose no competition like comport

Don't care if style scary or goofy, y'all get smoked like newports

Complements of strong competitve, I advice to chew gum

That's smell is bad for you, uza type that embrasses ur crews

Leave lost clues, shoes singing the blues, snooze you lose

This is crossword hobby sport that leave you going back, using the screws!
 
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Opinons significantly hot bars
Not finish, you see I try enables like Archie Arch
Your strategy shows no product, bad performance
You change voice every verse, imagin audio, funny voice
Always changes after every diss, enhance like productivity noise
So your relation of songs become greater ability , bright like refusal choice
Simply they come through all get a trick or treat, there style stink like stinky feet
Your voice has no noise, bargaining needs supervising speech of radio speech as you get kicked
They keep going, to continuing there weak lines, what they don't know, their permises needs to stop!
Saying nonsense, wasting time, taliking blah, blah, just having a laugh
Then technology changes, with your verse exchanging, leave frosty bars
Like Iceland bargaining deadlocks, return the world like heavenly shock!
 
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its a black market ordinance ruin your performance in tournaments
bumrush the stage smash the ornaments leave trails of fire following
riggs a microphone charlatan he mastered the astonishing, art of sword swallowing
round up all your men the people are the parliment my aguments are ad hominem
put them to the sword of solomon disregard the hollerin
express my dominance rockin armaments
 
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smush your face in the mashed potatoes
slam a spud to the snub-nose aim at your noggin
and plug holes
part of the mile high club of fellatio
high off zowie mowie
money stretch from the grand canyon to calis valleys
can get purple haze from an alley in boston
talkin to horatio
best of the unknowns
put light sabers to microphone clones
 
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Back to training
Left the ready room
Still standing
Not trying to bragg
Many flows in a bag
Of raps that wraps
Many minds, and see
Where's this battle
Will take us, they say my
Raps is
Crap is corny, well I'ma fix
My crap to hot rap, no slack
Rhyme simple , flame ball like Nba Jam and slam my
Challengers bars like Shaq!
 
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Usually its hurts

Sorry for my mistakes

This battle might not be

A pieace of break, but snap

Out, try it, I was on break

Now I'm back for more

To excused my wack

Use up my mentally

Education turn your bars

To what is retard

And forgive us if you lose

They going to say the

Meanest things, pull out

Texture wolf, bark out

Have them scared like

A ware wolf movie!
 
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