::Along Came A Spider:: Return of the KeyStyl3 !

[DOC H0LL!DAY]

ALCHEMY:

the ignorant get mad at he who has mastered his sanity

one who dwells in the canopy of peace forever happily

and all that im imagining usually starts attracting me

a one man army made of metaphyics, matter and alchemy

lonely i dream of peace and my portion of its abundant

spirit proven triumphant as body and mind become it

thanks to he I don't want nuthing I'm done wit sufferin

cold nights of wondering if the heat will ever come from within

will i forever be true to you through focus and discipline

that 8 fold path of untold wrath rescuing all who's listening

purify souls, work through nerve endings and shrink heads

black magician seem suspicious only to whisper what he said

guided minds who were once wise escaped from stray atoms

blind in both eyes but view the times through lines of grey matter

 

[TheNeoShell]

I'm definitely feeling the rhyme schemes and word play. Good shit.

The more and more you refine and tighten your skills, which I think is on it's way already; I want to see what you do with a topical joint.

Write something on one topic and go as long as you can. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with.

 

[DOC H0LL!DAY]

I'm definitely feeling the rhyme schemes and word play. Good shit.

The more and more you refine and tighten your skills, which I think is on it's way already; I want to see what you do with a topical joint.

Write something on one topic and go as long as you can. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with.

Thanks for the feed.

Here go 2 of my joints.

 

[omenREDZONE]

not bad there was some good lines in there u should try to find a beat to fit it... how do u post a thread on here anyways? I got a track I wanna put up but im not seeing where I can start a thread

 

[DOC H0LL!DAY]

not bad there was some good lines in there u should try to find a beat to fit it... how do u post a thread on here anyways? I got a track I wanna put up but im not seeing where I can start a thread

You need to have 300 post before u can make a thread bro. Thanks 4 tha feed.

 

[BaLdFacE]

I liked this piece a lot...

The wordplay was iLL and the whole thing flowed really good...

FirE...

FaCe... 6LBS of PressurE

 

[BaLdFacE]

yo can u tell me how to post a thread

 

[tnew440]

cool