ADHD! SHUT DA F*** UUUUUUP!!!!

[VIBE]

never cared for Jo KOY but his Netflix special was funny as shit

 

[konceptjones]

I usually don't post my own music cuz I think that shit weak but
https://soundcloud.com/kontakz/kontakz-devil-gene

I know y'all gon keep it one trillion

The single biggest problem I have with it is the sample that starts it off and continues throughout the track. There's too much energy in that frequency range and the rapper is competing with the sample for the listener's ear for the whole track. Next is the bass... It's gutless, kinda hollow sounding if you will. There's no real low end "oomph", no subharmonic gurgle to it. Also, there's no imaging to the mix. Everything in the track is dead center, vocals, sample, hats and snare... It could use some livening up even if it's just a subtle tempo-synced delay on the hats.

 

[illestni99ainne]

Fake but makes me want an Addams family series on Netflix now

What you need is a having a job series you wide nose new jersey nigger rat son of a bitch. Y'all don't know the struggle you just watch the shit we live through on youtube. You one click away from getting your ass beat mothafucka

Um what? I live in Nebraska

 

[TheNuttinProffessor]

I usually don't post my own music cuz I think that shit weak but
https://soundcloud.com/kontakz/kontakz-devil-gene

I know y'all gon keep it one trillion

The single biggest problem I have with it is the sample that starts it off and continues throughout the track. There's too much energy in that frequency range and the rapper is competing with the sample for the listener's ear for the whole track. Next is the bass... It's gutless, kinda hollow sounding if you will. There's no real low end "oomph", no subharmonic gurgle to it. Also, there's no imaging to the mix. Everything in the track is dead center, vocals, sample, hats and snare... It could use some livening up even if it's just a subtle tempo-synced delay on the hats.

Damn thank you for this very in depth critique. Crazy thing is the whole thing is dead center I know the producer doesn't do any imaging but I tried to spread the vocals even. I need to start gettin beats tracked out

@"5th Letter"
https://soundcloud.com/hennymishima/coke-feat-kontakz-prod-bitoy-beats

You gon fuck w this one bro

 

[TheNuttinProffessor]

Damn wrong person @riddlerap see previous post

 

[obnoxiouslyfresh]

Play this shit at my funeral if they catch me slippin.....

 

[5th Letter]

I usually don't post my own music cuz I think that shit weak but
https://soundcloud.com/kontakz/kontakz-devil-gene

I know y'all gon keep it one trillion

The single biggest problem I have with it is the sample that starts it off and continues throughout the track. There's too much energy in that frequency range and the rapper is competing with the sample for the listener's ear for the whole track. Next is the bass... It's gutless, kinda hollow sounding if you will. There's no real low end "oomph", no subharmonic gurgle to it. Also, there's no imaging to the mix. Everything in the track is dead center, vocals, sample, hats and snare... It could use some livening up even if it's just a subtle tempo-synced delay on the hats.

Damn thank you for this very in depth critique. Crazy thing is the whole thing is dead center I know the producer doesn't do any imaging but I tried to spread the vocals even. I need to start gettin beats tracked out

@"5th Letter"
https://soundcloud.com/hennymishima/coke-feat-kontakz-prod-bitoy-beats

You gon fuck w this one bro

This one is a little better

 

[playmaker88]

Karate kid always pissed me off they made Daniel Laruso such a bitch

 

[Splackavelli]

Play this shit at my funeral if they catch me slippin.....

perish the thought.

 

[2stepz_ahead]

The weekend

look like nas an Jennifer Hudson had a kid

 

[2stepz_ahead]

up since 8 doing yard work.

3 hours an 35 bags of mulch later....a nigga need a nap

 

[JonnyRoccIT]

They gotta make Almond milk that don't sog the Cereal so fast...

 

[playmaker88]

They gotta make Almond milk that don't sog the Cereal so fast...

Pro-tip almond milk and Honey nut Cherrios

 

[Trillfate]

Karate kid always pissed me off they made Daniel Laruso such a bitch

it couldve been called When caping goes wrong...

all he had to do was mind his business at the beach and he wouldn't have got his ass whooped and bullied, he would have had friends and he Still would have gotten that girl he liked...

 

[konceptjones]

They gotta make Almond milk that don't sog the Cereal so fast...

Can't make milk from almonds. Shit ain't nothin but water with powdered almonds in it; shits might as well be called almond Kool-Aid.

That's why your Cocoa Puffs get soggy like that.

 

[Turfaholic]

Aye does putlocker not work for anybody?

 

[konceptjones]

Karate kid always pissed me off they made Daniel Laruso such a bitch

it couldve been called When caping goes wrong...

all he had to do was mind his business at the beach and he wouldn't have got his ass whooped and bullied, he would have had friends and he Still would have gotten that girl he liked...

Out cold how all of his friends walked away from his ass after he got lumped up. Stopped speakin to him in the hallways and everything.

 

[Splackavelli]

Karate kid always pissed me off they made Daniel Laruso such a bitch

it couldve been called When caping goes wrong...

all he had to do was mind his business at the beach and he wouldn't have got his ass whooped and bullied, he would have had friends and he Still would have gotten that girl he liked...

it was funny how he was getting punked through the whole movie but Daniel wasn't no punk he was outnumbered that's all. he could hang with johnny one on one and he got them back at the Halloween dance. he deserved that though they was having a session in the restroom a he game in their and soaked them with the hose and wet up the "J" I don't blame them for jumping him after that.

 

[BiblicalAtheist]

The weekend

They photo-shopped her pores clean off!

 

[T. Sanford]

I'm over my sister's house & my nephew watching Maverick on TV

9 years old & already washed, disgusting smh