A passing judgement

[TheCATthatdidntDIE]

no reaction? im calling people out telling them im watching them fuck up, letting it happen, catalloging it, and then planning to throw it back in their faces and youre all cool with that? or is it not even worth commenting? I wrote this coming out of jail and realizing that i lost societies influence and could look from the outside in

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

reading this the first thing that comes to mind is influence...every line echoes pain and thought process mix with abstraction...which is good...bottom line good stuff...looking forward to reading part two...keep dropping those words of pure bliss of thought called poetry my fellow poet

peace

 

[TheCATthatdidntDIE]

damn dude, thanks....You dont even know me, and yet you like my stuff. I knew I was onto something, but as a poet and or sociologist, i am suspicious of my own opinions

 

[Tupacfan]

Yo,

I love love this piece. It felt like it was a reflective one too! I love it.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[TheCATthatdidntDIE]

Yo,

I love love this piece. It felt like it was a reflective one too! I love it.

Thanks for sharing!

you are welcome and thank you too for the comment.