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tupacfan;2714129 said:I enjoyed reading this piece...
the ending part had me in Ahhhh....
thanks for sharing Draft.
RuffDraft;2717077 said:Thanks for reading... appreciate it TF...
tupacfan;2723471 said:No doubt, any time...
I love to read other people's work and stuff and just show my support, lettin em' know Tupacfan reads this shit, she sees you and appreciates the time taken to share lol...
RuffDraft;2725409 said:lol *appreciates* It's not my best piece, but I do always tend to improve towards the end of the poems, I find it hard to introduce a poem well.
tupacfan;2732789 said:lol, no doubt..
I tend to do the same things, one of the things i learned is just keep on writing, keep spittin what's at the top of the mind, what im feeling inside, and doing that, it made is soo much easier for me to write.. now it may not be all that great, but the important thing is that I got it out of my system and now i can just exhale lol... revising poems actually takes away the true feeling and emotion of the poem.. the main purpose.. so yea, i just try and run with mines, who gives a crap if it don't rhyme, make sense. as long as i got those pent up feelings outta my system, it's all i care for... all the structure just kind of went out the window for me and created writer's block.
stupot0607;2748842 said:Good Poem Man.
I enjoyed it.....