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I like this one.. lol thought you were talking about a lover until that last line
 
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L.I.P.;1652826 said:
I like this one.. lol thought you were talking about a lover until that last line

Lol Thanks! I enjoyed writing this piece.. Altho it was short, but sometimes those are the best pieces too..

You know what I hate! That my poems are like proses! Because this piece is actually for my first love that passed away, my best friend too.. I miss him like crazy.. He was a straight poet.. Would sing to me, recite poems to me, perform for me.. Dam.. I miss that!

Anyways that's what that is!

Thanks for reading!
 
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Thank you for that one.. its like sometimes I need to read good pieces like that. I appreciate you.
 
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jaywillis;1681486 said:
Thank you for that one.. its like sometimes I need to read good pieces like that. I appreciate you.

Your welcome! very much..

Somestimes some of my best poems is short, concise and to the point.. and this is one of them..I appreaciate you reading, commenting and diggin this jawn..

Feels good that I can' move ya'll on such scales of appreciating what my heart spits..

Peace!
 
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Damn... this one hit home a bit. Different situation but similar effect. Keep doin what you do.
 
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Legend24;1708680 said:
Damn... this one hit home a bit. Different situation but similar effect. Keep doin what you do.

Aye Legend,

I'm glad you could relate in sort of way, and because of great poets like you, I will continue to be inspired by ya'll and keep writing fa sho.

Thanks for reading and commenting.. And I mean that..as writers its always nice to hear other peoples thoughts or perspectives on the poem or yet critique so we can become beter writers.

Peace!
 
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