The Last Women Standing

[ocelot]

*snap snap* good poem... *snap snap*

 

[Tupacfan]

thank you for reading and commenting!

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

this piece is truly amazing...you have the strength of no other and you shall beat this struggle...with your physical stature and or verbal abilities...this piece is truly touching

My spirit will roam freely like a flying phoenix,

While my presence of existent shall still exist thru my bosoms,

In spring you will see lilac Nita, when flower’s blossom,

Sweet like Hawaii’s plumeria that so eloquently blooms.

It may not be today, or tomorrow, only time will only tell very soon,

Until then, I am the last women standing..

those lines right there resemble victory through the ashes of life...bottom line good work as always

keep dropping those pure lines of encouraging scriptures called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[Tupacfan]

Thank for always showing love real P.. fa real!

Feedback is always motivation and I'm glad I have you and VSOP to provide that on many occassions. Speaking of VSOP, I hope he alright, I ain't herd nada from him..

As always thanks for your support fellow poet!