Soaked Up Dreams by VSOP

[Legend24]

Nicely done.

my sponge is a vessel
I take it to my notebook and squeeze
let my thoughts and dreams just leak on the sheets
osmosis breathes through these deceased trees

That basically sums up what it is we do. Captured it very well with those lines. Keep doin you bro.

 

[konflick]

u wrote some deep stuff write there struggles and how people cope wit problems and da solutions they should take its poem when ur consious is talking to u

 

[Tupacfan]

this is nice right here!

I enjoyed reading it!

I feel like I been sleeping on my poetic pieces lately LOL.. Dammit, ya'll making me feel like that LOL..

Over all great piece, thanks for sharing and props to legend for inspiring others ..

Peace!