Rain

[Tupacfan]

I love every bit of this Kidd,

The metaphors and word play was on point! And the words gave me images I could paint! And I have a understanding what your conveying bit imma keep it to myself

Thanks for sharing, and you need to write more often sweetie.. perhaps we could inspire each other

I like the fact that you even admit to getting some help in orchestrating this piece..
Next time hit me up, unless..its a different circumstance if you catch my drift..

Peace!

 

[Aquafinafloe]

wow you know what is soo crazy about this peice l0l..... is i live in wa sate and that is all we get up in here is rain if someone from up here were to read this they would prob get more isane then what they already are due to RAIN. i enjoyed reading this though it shows the "take the time to breath relax and just enjoy life" point of view...who would have thought something so simple like this could actualy be a mind wonder!..i love to acknowlede nature and the things that people ignore or take for granted...im that kid that "splashes" in the puddles when i am in an excited mood..im the person that "smells" the rain coming and smiles...."no crazy nonsense today"! this was beautiful i look forward to reading more

 

[Sovo_Nah]

Nice. I dig it. cool concept.

 

[RuffDraft]

Found this whilst searching through google, great post, really like the poem... especially the whole personification of it all... really nice :tu