Nice!! Enjoyed this piece, but think it would be structured as a more regular poem with new lines being started.
I really like the imagery and the 'phor though as well as how you end the poem with a man standing at the most highest plane, rather than on his knees.
Thanks for sharing.
I really like the imagery and the 'phor though as well as how you end the poem with a man standing at the most highest plane, rather than on his knees.
Thanks for sharing.
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