Primal Things-St.Nic

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You got potential bruh. Tweak around with your voice on the mix to make it clash better. I like it and the bars are there. Keep it up.
 
Only person on these boards atm and I can't post a topic. So here's my bars. Put my life in these. Y'all gonna dig it and you don't even know it yet.

Remix to Terrorist Threats by Ab-Soul

Ba-babylon

Had em drawn

Burned to the ground

then its shadow spawned 

never bite the flow, but, that shit was on

Seem ab-stract ideas gon’ free the pawns

Chris cox cut some snakes when he mowed the lawn

Turned around the same snakes told him move along

blatant paradigms.. snakes won’t spare a life, or think twice ‘fore they take a bite

out to conjure convicts just so they constrict their vice

the number caught or shot dependent on the jailers price

and my advice? telling you its time to splice, rise and chap’ron lies to light

stand-up-and-fight _ you gonna live on your knees or die on your feet, 

times up for copping pleas, asking please _

all they ever do in return is scoff, cough, feed trough with dirty green

sitting round with soul and smoke 30 G’s,

fell asleep, then I woke up in a crazy dream

mind still enlightened 'spite all the hazy trees

trying to find a reason for it all I see is leaves

Masked in a dense fog blowing with the breeze 

they all start falling screaming SOMEONE HELP US PLEASE

while the evergreens laugh cause they flourishing

the blind leaves scream louder KOBY HELP US PLEASE

use your mind, spread your message, you can set us free!

I spit some bars, breathed life, and then I decreed

The time was now, God give this forest peace

The fog cleared up, all the pain and strife was ceased

Old leaves fell slaves but new leaves grew free

Spoken word after verses

See it was all symbolic of the people we be

trees victims of the weather ever at its mercy

To their lives, the money, the dollars, the green, the king

ruling over their lives, making slaves out of all of our minds

The evergreen trees thrived the rest fight to survive

then Koby arrived, contrived bars on his inner Kendrick,  soul and Jesus Christ 

An everyday dog sparked a mindset that controlled the fog 

No longer could the evergreens be playing God

the ground had become equal, system without a flaw

every tree can prosper, white or brown, fat or skinny short or tall

see this is how God sees us, don’t let the devil deceive ya

money nothing but paper,

lift enlightened up and see the dollar meet its maker

You welcome.

 

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