playmaker88
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Nice that was really rich poem
First time i read one and commented thanks for sharing.
First time i read one and commented thanks for sharing.
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playmaker88;1587024 said:Nice that was really rich poem
First time i read one and commented thanks for sharing.
kzzl;1590211 said:ah, shit. i still remember the blankets and stuff from my moms and grandma. i'm diggin how you put some life into it, props.
tupacfan;1586998 said:For my grandma..
My Grandmother's Blanket
Grandmothers blanket holds the sweet smell of sage,
woven by enchantement, as the spirits feel no rage.
tried in eyelet shadows, cast into the snow,
tumblewoods and deserts she traveled long ago.
The threads are her wisdom she passes on to you.
Reflections wrap around us, as if we always knew.
The patchwork shows directions of North, South, East and West.
The needle points the way so we know where to rest.
Grandmothers blanket holds the soft warmth of down,
from fined feathered friends and foliage all around.
Covered by a breeze and a soft summer rain,
lightning dances wildly, as the thunder heals her pain.
The colors are her passion, beneath the cotton lining,
for she knows the spirit world, is free and never binding.
Footsteps walk below the soil, mother earth is listening.
frosts paint the blanket edges, above the stars are glistening.
Gradnmothers blanket has many stories to tell,
the colors have faded for the years have turned it pale.
Comfortable by the oneness, her head bows down in grace,
thanking great spirit for her honor in this place.
I miss you grandma! Choke, choke..
-2pacfan
REAL_POETICAL;1599986 said:that was remarkable....the essence of something so history stricken and full of love like grandmothers blanket just brings a tear to the eye...make me reflect on my grandma during her time and how things like her quilt just has a spiritual guidance to whoever touches it...bottom line excellent work...keep droppin those lines of pure memories that sketch in the word poetry my fellow poetess
peace