major pain
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Aquafinafloe
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ayo that was fucki filthy baby on some real shyt mayne fuck wat errybody else is sayin about the rules an ish i loved that off tops!!! you come off like a very very intelligent open minded person whom is aware of everything however you dont fall for everything i can tell that u actualy been there and done it you havent turnd into one of those "i hate god freaks" that shows that you have a very loyal persona about yourself and you know what is real...your lyrical grammer was not to off the wall tryna be all smart and ish it was jsut perfect for the concept it is realy important for people to understand what you are trying to relay in your message and u made it suteable for ppl that dont know big fancy words yet versatile enough for big word people to respect..i would keep on writtin sweety and if u ever want to do a collab then hit me up in a pam! i wouldnt mind doin one wit you...game reconize game and a boss reconize a boss 
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Aquafinafloe;1226385 said:ayo that was fucki filthy baby on some real shyt mayne fuck wat errybody else is sayin about the rules an ish i loved that off tops!!! you come off like a very very intelligent open minded person whom is aware of everything however you dont fall for everything i can tell that u actualy been there and done it you havent turnd into one of those "i hate god freaks" that shows that you have a very loyal persona about yourself and you know what is real...your lyrical grammer was not to off the wall tryna be all smart and ish it was jsut perfect for the concept it is realy important for people to understand what you are trying to relay in your message and u made it suteable for ppl that dont know big fancy words yet versatile enough for big word people to respect..i would keep on writtin sweety and if u ever want to do a collab then hit me up in a pam! i wouldnt mind doin one wit you...game reconize game and a boss reconize a boss
THanks for the props
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I am open minded when it comes to music, hell we all should be. I also feel like I am very smart, and have a great use and understanding of words in general. I really pay attention to songs or raps that make me have to research to learn what the hell you are talking about. Big props on that. Also the writing was done so that i could find the flow by reading it, i feel as if I have an understanding of how it would sound. I havent went to your soundclick or other pages and heard what you and HS sound like which I assume is the group. But just based off this written i hope you sound as good as it is written. My ipod is short on real talent and am always looking for new playlists. Nice work
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Mdizzle9000
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great verse. kinda reminds me of somethin i've written before. i wanna hear how that'd sound over a beat. dope lyrics though keep it up.
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Tha Killer;1251535 said:
I hear you man, but I take time out of my day to read a nigga shit and most of the time, my feedback is simple.. Niggas want two or three paragraphs. I read it, I like it, I give simple props.... I dont really dissect niggas verses too heavily unless they my own
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OGMoneyFOE
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I like it mayne. I reminds me of my song "Chasin' a dream" just with more vocabulary. Real nice drop I just wish U would've set up the structure a let better so it would be easyer to read.
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