maxseveneight vs b.c.o.dcru

[maxseveneight]

checking in

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

Im wit it...three rounds tho? Lol

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Vote on other battles and post your check in links. One a piece for each of you. These still need votes:

ItzGravitaion vs thedesolateone: http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone(Again-)

love yal vs deaththreats: http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101896-Love-Yal-vs-Deaththreats

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone(Again-)

there is my link.

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

I'm in the mood to laugh...drop your verse!
Your ambition or you rappin...idk what's worse!
Smh @ max, dog! fetch a stlye for your rhymes
and if you too lazy to do that...then stop wastein my mins.
Take position, while I slump this ramblin Mel Gibson
pump burrels that are ridged take off half his nurological functions
then he'll claim "it's my shoulder, it's nothing" but he's fakein...he's buddens
the remainder of his dome is like herpies, the mumps...nah it's more like results of one good lyrical punch
you can tell he's outta touch...Afros? Alphabet soup?
This dudes a paraplegic and LE is just something to do
if not, well...You've been dropped out a B-52, super glued to a misile, and no parachute
to the max you'll get pushed, and it's at your own fault
for that 78 sugar hill cadence, and retarded tough talk
three rounds in a duel? Let's get real mu-phucka!
Cause reality is...your thoughts are weak, built on an even weaker structure

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

This round I use an axe
what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade
rip out what's behind his abs...only air
deflate em'
I'll take the seven or eight rating for being quite ill
and spittin rounds at a nobody cause there's no comp here
grab this bitch by the hair, drag em' back to the lair
club em' to death
use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast
max is a costipated metaphor a rusty tec
and his brain matters composed of outdated tech
a soulja boy duckin arrows and spears
and when he hear congas get played youngin cowers in fear
when he steps from behind the desktop he knows there's no more fake shit
and right outside there's an acronym who runs wit the natives
debate about details, but look at the facts...I'll let his dickbeaters swing
he just got hit wit two slaps

 

[maxseveneight]

iller than most
you get burnt like toast
on the mic i boast
cooking b.c.o.dcru like celebrity roast
representing the 502
down like dru
my rhymes stay tight
yours fall apart like missing screws
you get booed
dont act brand new
your styles as wack as it ever was
who does the mic so well
hard to read by sight like braille
wishing your brother george was here like del
dismantling you cause your frail
get back in your shell
while i chase wack mcs you chase tail

 

[maxseveneight]

im down to slaughter
rap marauder
hide your daughters
i keep it real
while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler
nasty like sewer water
you got blood on your blade
i regenerate
verbal kung fu knock out your hearing aid
like special ed i got it made
crooked like cops from dade
county
you try and hound me
yeah right your soulja
more like soulja boy tell em
your wack i can smell em
hit you in your melon
im the rap police your the felon
bco
you got a bitch cat origin
ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again
lyrics keep pouring in
the only 2 slaps are given to your whore and them

 

[maxseveneight]

78 the top bidder
i get props worldwide
you only get props on twitter
short text
i wreck
threaten your manhood like bad sex
you have no muscles so dont try and flex
i come thru with the wild style
b.c.o got the old style
i got hundreds u got singles
attack the track like bengal
im rapping in person and online
you only rap thru smoke signals
you aint great
complaining about 2 battles with the same due date
for heavens sake
step up and your soul i will take
i break
your dcru cut
shut the f up
drop shit like taking a dump
have you begging enough is enough

 

[b.c.o.dcru]

Feeding ain't my stlye but...let's pretend I'm a garbage truck
eating three bags of your trash, your right...enough is enough

*For the next two bars does a max impersonation*
the presure ain't great
I just couldn't wait
max is dead weight
so that bitch you call mum, the only one with complaints bout due dates

*rolls on the floor in laughter, and the impersonation continues*
iller than who?
Krista Tha Batista's like...eeewww!
Back to the lab B-Rad
most of Malibu's embarased, and want you to move

so I'll let the room judge, cause fo real it's a wrap
I think that was a great impersonation of an imitation rapper

*the voice in my head says..."nah continue, play wit his name"*
max father's a warm day...bet you think you hot, hu?
The truth is...you just a 78 degree son
a vagrant bum full of spunk
from the five hundred two 78 year ol' bums he let's hump
I know that's sick, but what's disturbing is that not maxes maximum
when I got blood on my blade, I was like...what's this fuck shit?
Fuckboy is gutless, glad I ain't risk havin' ta kill a witness over an empty slut
who I already slapped up, weaved her three swings, and jus knocked out wit one punch
yeah I'm da crew cut...from the 38 that split ya shape up
max shape up!

*lemme get off this super forced punch*
I'm cold...wit da bars, retarded bar-burr! charge you a buck! Buck! Buck!

 

[deaththreats]

Pretty nice battle...

ROUND 1:

Punches: bcodcru (that sugarhill cadence punch was nice)

Multi's: Tie (none really used)

Metaphors: bcodcru (both rappers had some, but bco had more)

Structure: Tie (both had easy to read structure)

Overall Post: bcodcru (if you compare line for line, bco had the overall post)

Vote: bcodcru

Round 2:

Max78 best lines:

i keep it real

while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler

yeah right your soulja

more like soulja boy tell em

your wack i can smell em

bco

you got a bitch cat origin

ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again

bco dcru best lines:

This round I use an axe

what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade

rip out what's behind his abs...only air

grab this bitch by the hair, drag em' back to the lair

club em' to death

use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast

Round 2:

Punches: bcod cru

Multi's: Max78

Metaphors: Tie

Structure: Tie

Wordplay: Max78

Overall Post: bcodcru

Vote: Tie

Round 3:

Punches: bco dcru

Multi's: Tie

Metaphors: bco dcru

Structure: Tie

Wordplay: bcodcru

Overall Post: bco dcru

Vote: bco dcru

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Round 1

b.c.o.dcru started off very weak but about halfway through, he came through and ended it okay. maxseveneight stayed pretty consistent. It was a real hard round to score. Have to score this one a tie which means 1 vote to each! Round 1 - tie

Round 2

b.c.o.dcru didn't come as hard as he did the first round. It was alright during the middle but the beginning and end was okay. I liked some of the personals. And maxseveneight didn't come nearly as hard. Had he spit as hard as he did in the first round, I would've given him my vote this round. Round 2 - b.c.o.dcru

Round 3

b.c.o.dcru didn't even follow the rules and went way over the line limit lol. It was pretty consistent but nothing special to me. I liked the personals but maxseveneight came hard in the middle of his verse with all those metaphors. Neither stuck out to me. I gotta give this one another tie. Vote - tie

If I had to vote an overall winner, I'd say b.c.o.dcru barely.

 

[love yal]

I'm in the mood to laugh...drop your verse!
Your ambition or you rappin...idk what's worse!
Okay intro...good punchline..
Smh @ max, dog! fetch a stlye for your rhymes
and if you too lazy to do that...then stop wastein my mins.
Alright..
Take position, while I slump this ramblin Mel Gibson
pump burrels that are ridged take off half his nurological functions
Nice line and vocab..
then he'll claim "it's my shoulder, it's nothing" but he's fakein...he's buddens
the remainder of his dome is like herpies, the mumps...nah it's more like results of one good lyrical punch
Pretty good..bar
you can tell he's outta touch...Afros? Alphabet soup?
This dudes a paraplegic and LE is just something to do
Good multies..and rhymes
if not, well...You've been dropped out a B-52, super glued to a misile, and no parachute
to the max you'll get pushed, and it's at your own fault
Okay...drop you out a b-52 no parachute ...then is your own fault...crazy line
for that 78 sugar hill cadence, and retarded tough talk
three rounds in a duel? Let's get real mu-phucka!
Whoa...78 suger hill cadence..and retarded tough talk..let's get real..wild line
Cause reality is...your thoughts are weak, built on an even weaker structure

Ooh..good ending

Round 1 verse from bco dcru: 8.0
Good verse, many creative lines

 

[love yal]

This round I use an axe

what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade

Crazy line...axe what the fragrence? Blood on the blade..dangerous opener

rip out what's behind his abs...only air

deflate em'

Okay..only air deflate em...something different

I'll take the seven or eight rating for being quite ill

and spittin rounds at a nobody cause there's no comp here

Okay Personal....seven or eight rating for being quite ill

grab this bitch by the hair, drag em' back to the lair

club em' to death

Deadly...line but good....grab by the hair drag em then club em to end

use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast

max is a costipated metaphor a rusty tec

That line was pretty cool, but not cool...mouth as ashtray, rest his feet on his chest, he's like rust tec

and his brain matters composed of outdated tech

a soulja boy duckin arrows and spears

Whoa...brain matters composed to outdated tech, ducking arrows and spears

and when he hear congas get played youngin cowers in fear

when he steps from behind the desktop he knows there's no more fake shit

Slick line....good concepts...hear congas in fear, steps behinds desktop no fake..okay

and right outside there's an acronym who runs wit the natives

debate about details, but look at the facts...I'll let his dickbeaters swing

he just got hit wit two slaps

Not bad for ending...run wit natives gets two slaps

B.c.o.dcru..8.3

Creative verse...good lines..good concepts

Round 2

 

[love yal]

iller than most

you get burnt like toast

on the mic i boast

Good opener..with good rhymes iller than most get burnt like toast, mic I boast

cooking b.c.o.dcru like celebrity roast

representing the 502

Alright line...concept..cooking like celebrity roast representing the 502..okay

down like dru

my rhymes stay tight

yours fall apart like missing screws

Good line your rhymes stay tight fall apart like missing screws

you get booed

dont act brand new

Not bad...okay get booed don't act brand new..

your styles as wack as it ever was

who does the mic so well

Alright line and slick....styles as ever was...who does the mic so well.

hard to read by sight like braille

wishing your brother george was here like del

Good rhymes...hard to read sight like del, wishing he was here like del..good line.

dismantling you cause your frail

get back in your shell

Nice vocab...dismantling cause your frail...get back in your shell..good

while i chase wack mcs you chase tail

Good ending...keep up the good work..

Maxseveneight: 8.0

Lines were good...the rhymes were good as the concepts..good job

 

[love yal]

im down to slaughter
rap marauder
Good opener with good wordplay
hide your daughters
i keep it real
Okay line hide your daughter keep it real...something different
while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler
nasty like sewer water
Not bad....rhyme good...good line..fake wrestler like Jerry Lawler, nasy like sewer water
you got blood on your blade
i regenerate
verbal kung fu knock out your hearing aid
Good comeback.....on his first round verse...blood on your blade knock out the hearing aid..
like special ed i got it made
crooked like cops from dade
county
Pretty wild...good concept like special ed got it made, crooked like cops from dade county
you try and hound me
yeah right your soulja
more like soulja boy tell em
your wack i can smell em
hit you in your melon
im the rap police your the felon
nice rhyme good line...he try to hound him, like soulija he's wack they can smell, he's police he's felon..good line.
bco
you got a bitch cat origin
ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again
lyrics keep pouring in
the only 2 slaps are given to your whore and them

Good ending.....got a cat orgin ding hit the 10 count floor again, lyric keep pouring and slap them
Good concepts

Maxseveneight: 8.3
Good verse..good lines keep up the good work.

 

[love yal]

Both battler did a good I read three round of each battler I think they were funny and enjoyable
They came with different style....good punchlines and good concept I enjoy B.c.o dcru and Maxseveneight verses...its a tie...good luck to both

Good battle
Vote: tie

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Since this battle has been open for over a 7-8 weeks, I am going to declare b.c.o.dcru the winner. The way I tallied the votes is 3 people voted, including myself and all 3 rounds went b.c.o.dcru's way 3-2. If you'd like me to re-open this thread, send me a PM.