deaththreats
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Check........ Check...........PNC............FiFTH THIRD
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nkflier23;3008925 said:
You can post ya verse whenever as long as it's before the deadline........
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deaththreats
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Strictly Business..........Never Personal
NKFlier23, no avi.. no previous battles.. so im judging you GUILTY witout a trial
GUILTY of being a Jordan worshiper.. non rapping..white girl lusting pedophile *link at bottom*
Water flow, my lyrics keep pouring out...while ya lyrics is running out
No way he can run wit or step to me his alias is lyrical gout
Lets get gully, boy my HK blasts BANG- BANG- BANG- BANG
23 shots slang, wit no aim, give N-K’s brain, AIR time like a paper plane
the A-K will leave N-K, D-O-A, you living? no way, you can keep wishing on a star
Jordan stan just met his match, playoff run stalled like a car, im da ‘89 Pistons…Dumars
don’t make me grab the blade, once I grab your scalp, go ahead and grab a toupe’
or u can flinch and end up like the headless horseman and that’s a double L (LL) no Cool J
my flows sick, skitzo, it’s crazy..mentally it’s not all there
man crushin' Jordan, so when he dunked and had his tongue out, u envisioned ya balls there
Im too advance, you remedial, aint no way you could ever compare to me
Im Jordan in his prime.. you barely a sidekick, Will Perdue... Steve Kerr...Scottie P
man this gotta be, prob-a-bly one of the easiest vic-to-ries for me
since battling L-O-V-E, Yal kidding me, Rd 1 in the b-a-g and it was S-I-M-P-L-E
*link for above rhyme*
http://community.allhiphop.com/show...erage-white-girls-don-t-be-askin-for-it/page6
NKFlier23, no avi.. no previous battles.. so im judging you GUILTY witout a trial
GUILTY of being a Jordan worshiper.. non rapping..white girl lusting pedophile *link at bottom*
Water flow, my lyrics keep pouring out...while ya lyrics is running out
No way he can run wit or step to me his alias is lyrical gout
Lets get gully, boy my HK blasts BANG- BANG- BANG- BANG
23 shots slang, wit no aim, give N-K’s brain, AIR time like a paper plane
the A-K will leave N-K, D-O-A, you living? no way, you can keep wishing on a star
Jordan stan just met his match, playoff run stalled like a car, im da ‘89 Pistons…Dumars
don’t make me grab the blade, once I grab your scalp, go ahead and grab a toupe’
or u can flinch and end up like the headless horseman and that’s a double L (LL) no Cool J
my flows sick, skitzo, it’s crazy..mentally it’s not all there
man crushin' Jordan, so when he dunked and had his tongue out, u envisioned ya balls there
Im too advance, you remedial, aint no way you could ever compare to me
Im Jordan in his prime.. you barely a sidekick, Will Perdue... Steve Kerr...Scottie P
man this gotta be, prob-a-bly one of the easiest vic-to-ries for me
since battling L-O-V-E, Yal kidding me, Rd 1 in the b-a-g and it was S-I-M-P-L-E
*link for above rhyme*
http://community.allhiphop.com/show...erage-white-girls-don-t-be-askin-for-it/page6
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since this the first round I bet you'd expect me to hold back
think ima relax, cut some slack and be beat by a nigga thats wack?
fuck that, ya brains will go splat after I attack wit my lyrical mack
and the ruger is vocal, will put you in a choke hold and on ya back
the verbal 9 milli will leave ya body chilly and have you feelin silly
questionin yaself and askin why'd i think I could fuck wit he
nigga im too cold im frozen, got bars like ice cream
ghost faced killer, i made the guy from the movie scream
ya wordplay is average, flow's ass and lines got me think you fkin wit meth
not like redman, but the drugs, man the ones that had you screamin threats of death
typa nigga that think he welcome in any hood, come through smilin thinkin its all good
I wish a nigga would, tone in his mouth leave him scream "im jus misunderstood"
now see the shit I spit? verbal lightning that's frightening
jealous niggas get mad outta spite and start fighting
this match was over before it started like somebody just wet it
I jus put ole boy's flame out, now lay down, and close his casket
think ima relax, cut some slack and be beat by a nigga thats wack?
fuck that, ya brains will go splat after I attack wit my lyrical mack
and the ruger is vocal, will put you in a choke hold and on ya back
the verbal 9 milli will leave ya body chilly and have you feelin silly
questionin yaself and askin why'd i think I could fuck wit he
nigga im too cold im frozen, got bars like ice cream
ghost faced killer, i made the guy from the movie scream
ya wordplay is average, flow's ass and lines got me think you fkin wit meth
not like redman, but the drugs, man the ones that had you screamin threats of death
typa nigga that think he welcome in any hood, come through smilin thinkin its all good
I wish a nigga would, tone in his mouth leave him scream "im jus misunderstood"
now see the shit I spit? verbal lightning that's frightening
jealous niggas get mad outta spite and start fighting
this match was over before it started like somebody just wet it
I jus put ole boy's flame out, now lay down, and close his casket
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raw-material_ahh
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The rules say 16 lines. ^^ That's 21 lines. Before the voters can start voting, edit your verse to 16 lines.
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raw-material_ahh
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nkflier23;3034813 said:
It's cool. I will clarify next round. Good luck.
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raw-material_ahh
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I am going to put this battle on hold. Next round, I will explain every rule that isn't self-explanatory. Seeing as though nkflier23 posted a verse before deaththreats and deleted it, then posted another more battle orientated verse, I don't think he deserves to be disqualified. I could understand if he was me, love yal, or thedesolateone who know what is feeding by now. But the decision to DQ those 4 people who did not check in on time or drop their verses on time stand. That's either lazy or unfortunate BC they could not be online. To them, I suggest planning to post their verses early like sniperk to meet deadlines. Anyway, I'm gonna close this thread until nkflier23 messages me his new verse by tomorrow before midnight eastern timezone unless deaththreats is fine with nkflier23 feeding off of him for this round only.
To deaththreats: if you are fine with nkflier23 feeding, send me a message saying you are so that I could reopen this thread for voting.
To nkflier23: I've sent you a PM already about this. If you don't see an additional PM regarding if deaththreats is fine about your current verse feeding, then you should probably go ahead and write a new verse before Wednesday, July 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Again, the reason feeding is not allowed is BC these are only 1 round battles. Which means if deaththreats drops first and nkflier23 feeds, he has an advantage to play off his rhymes and turn them on him and deaththreats does not have that chance since there is no round two where nkflier23 goes first and deaththreats feeds. Peace.
To deaththreats: if you are fine with nkflier23 feeding, send me a message saying you are so that I could reopen this thread for voting.
To nkflier23: I've sent you a PM already about this. If you don't see an additional PM regarding if deaththreats is fine about your current verse feeding, then you should probably go ahead and write a new verse before Wednesday, July 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Again, the reason feeding is not allowed is BC these are only 1 round battles. Which means if deaththreats drops first and nkflier23 feeds, he has an advantage to play off his rhymes and turn them on him and deaththreats does not have that chance since there is no round two where nkflier23 goes first and deaththreats feeds. Peace.
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raw-material_ahh
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Open for voting.
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i think this battle was close but deaththreats wins it for me, he took something he knew about nkflier and dissed him around that, nice metaphors and creativity in the bars as well.
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raw-material_ahh
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Battle is tied 2-2. Closest battle yet!
WallH will cast the deciding vote. Try to explain a little bit since it's the deciding vote.
WallH will cast the deciding vote. Try to explain a little bit since it's the deciding vote.
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deaththreats - I thought his bars were very creative and the way he brought up homies posting career like that was the nail in the coffin. overall I thought the whole verse was potent as fuck.
nkflier23 - lyrics were ok, and it flowed well. I thought you could have been more creative and witty and you should have attempted to respond more venomously than you did.
My vote: deaththreats
nkflier23 - lyrics were ok, and it flowed well. I thought you could have been more creative and witty and you should have attempted to respond more venomously than you did.
My vote: deaththreats
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raw-material_ahh
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deaththreats wins. Moving onto the 2nd round.
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