LE Tournament #1 ROUND ONE - Disciplined InSight versus FOREVER92

[Disciplined InSight]

Check.........

 

[FOREVER92]

Check.......

 

[Aquaf!nafloe]

alright boys get it in now! i need to take notes...l0l

 

[FOREVER92]

Just wrote this....

My pen bleed the blood of gods seed
kill the paper cause of my lyrical greed
yea i paint a slow death for my enemies
behind the bars like life in the penetentaries
so you thinkin what my skill like...
Im raw like im in the kicthen cookin white
my flow and lyrics like a double edge dagger
i hop in a cypher and cause your whole crew to stagger
the time for your "squad up"
im a "wayne" you like this a back to the future product
i discipline in-sight like yo mama beat you at the sto
beat you like you stole, try to borrow my flo
i aint sign off on it, you might spit sick but i vomit
i solomly swear, rap circles round this l 7 square
yea my name forever, cause when im gone ill still be breathing
through the ink, so ill inform yall when ever i plan on leaven

 

[raw-material_ahh]

There is a mandatory 16 lines rules. You need 2 more lines. You can edit your verse before Disciplined InSight posts his.

 

[Aquaf!nafloe]

aww sheet insight! u betta geeet jiggy weet it!!!!

 

[FOREVER92]

There is a mandatory 16 lines rules. You need 2 more lines. You can edit your verse before Disciplined InSight posts his.

yea my bad i miss counted the bars, but i finished it up

 

[chriskyte410717]

lol..........

 

[Disciplined InSight]

This is gonna be easier than I thought...

Seriously..

You’re a weakling leaking from slashes touched, deep gashes, cuts.
Living up to ya name through dirt naps…FOREVER in a casket tucked.
No boldness, your script’s timid. Nine times outta ten you’re offended.
You claim realrecognizereal…then from my view your shit’s pretended.
The MC’ing you exhibit? Disgusting, this loser’s a dead imposter.
Face it, you can’t bus boy…
…and I’m not talking about your job at Red Lobster.
It’s done. I’m Lebron catching Heat from this win his flow’s boring.
The decision’s easy…too bad you’re in the city catching the short end.
Each punch is made for torment, hits you like a thousand hornets.
FOREVER’s the 1st hit…not the one with Drake, Ye, Wayne and Em on it.
Chicks you save I’ll dick ‘em. You keep capes and don’t evict ‘em.
If you think I’m a Loughner…consider yourself a Tuscon shooting victim.
Your verse is soft. The pressure’s on, get popped like a blackhead.
He slippin’ plus X’d out on the pipe...no wonder your favorite’s a crack head.
This doesn’t suit you. Come harder when you facing rage.
You better off satisfying ONE FAN…check his ReverbNation page.

Any explanations PM me..

 

[Legend24]

Disciplined InSight takes it, not even close in my opinion.

His lines cut harder, his verse was much more technical with solid lyricism.

The MC’ing you exhibit? Disgusting, this loser’s a dead imposter.

Face it, you can’t bus boy…

…and I’m not talking about your job at Red Lobster.

This line was sick.

Forever92 was more elementary with his rhymes and didn't really utilize any lyrical techniques other than the standard rhyming scheme.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

In the prediction/shit talking thread, this was my prediction, "I respect FOREVER92 for giving this text battling shit a shot but I have a feeling Disciplined InSight knows what's up and he may come away with the win." and I do respect FOREVER92 for giving it a shot. I really liked this line "i discipline in-sight like yo mama beat you at the sto" That was sick. There was a few easy lines though, a little bit more than Disciplined InSight's verse had. He had a few personals, good closer, good intro, sick rhymes. I gotta give it to him. Would've been a little closer and harder to judge had FOREVER92 took his time I think. Vote - Disciplined InSight

 

[sniperk]

Forever92 had some hot lines.

I liked: "i solomly swear, rap circles round this l 7 square"

However, he was all over the place with his subject matter and not really throwing anything more than glancing blows.

Disciplined Insight came right out the gate with that Kool G. Rap type flow or some murking isht:

"You’re a weakling leaking from slashes touched, deep gashes, cuts.

Living up to ya name through dirt naps…FOREVER in a casket tucked."

Harder hitting punchlines, more complex rhymes, I don't know either of these cats but it seems like Disciplined Insight has been in a few battles before and his experience shows.

Respect to both verses but I'm going to have give my vote to Disciplined Insight.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Disciplined InSight wins 3-0 KO.