This poetic verse was ill Vsop! every line was hitting, btw, I like this beat.. I thought it was nice, something out of my ordinary and i enjoyed that.
these were my favorite lines:
she was stuck at my first Haiku
that went somethin like "I always knew"
"it was always you"'s
and "soon I will say I do"
again for the first time
she read it
loved it
but it was one of my worst rhymes
dude has to be hurt
cryin
why didn't he treat his girl like I did
her presence was herbal essence
everytime I'd see her
I'd say "Hi gift"
she was my mine but his
she is mine I neglect
effect
pre-relationship defect
we left
and now all but time is left
these were my favorite lines:
she was stuck at my first Haiku
that went somethin like "I always knew"
"it was always you"'s
and "soon I will say I do"
again for the first time
she read it
loved it
but it was one of my worst rhymes
dude has to be hurt
cryin
why didn't he treat his girl like I did
her presence was herbal essence
everytime I'd see her
I'd say "Hi gift"
she was my mine but his
she is mine I neglect
effect
pre-relationship defect
we left
and now all but time is left
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