REAL_POETICAL
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that was indeed emotionally amazing...you painted a black letter box image in my head of whats going on in the poem....its tough and a shame when you love somebody so much and they have to go off to take care of something that can wait...to this day there's women and men going through the same diliemia...losing their mate to the dedicated job description...a line that almost had me at a tear was: As she careful watch her lover, her soul mate/
Pack up his boots, socks, honor and her fragile heart
incredible.....bottom line excellent work...keep dropping those letters to cure a coping heart called poetry my fellow poetress
peace
Pack up his boots, socks, honor and her fragile heart
incredible.....bottom line excellent work...keep dropping those letters to cure a coping heart called poetry my fellow poetress
peace
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