Hurt :(

[REAL_POETICAL]

wow....one thing about this poem is that it hits so home with me being the heartbreaker....i'm far from perfect and messing with love can caused such harm to the one that feels it ....which in some cases leaves a scar mentally towards the one thats break the heart...each line painted a picture of how love can be so cruel especially when a person thinks that things are fine....bottom line good work...hope to see more of ya work...keep droppin those lines of pure resentment and promise called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[jayy.prime]

But I was stupid enough to live for you then you hurt me

that simple line right there hit me hard, because i know the exact feeling to "live" for someone, as you said..and them take it so lightly, when you're giving your heart and soul to them..i can feel your pain deep in this joint..the hopelessness and the true to-the-soul pain thats felt when you're hearts broken..very nice drop..feel like i'm crying with ya..lol.

 

[BlackRoses]

Thanx Real and Jayy...really appreciate the love and feedback! If you listen to "Hurt" by Dirty Money feat. Drake...that's my inspiration for this poem as well as a past relationship that took me MONTHS to get over it.

 

[BlackRoses]

wow....one thing about this poem is that it hits so home with me being the heartbreaker....i'm far from perfect and messing with love can caused such harm to the one that feels it ....which in some cases leaves a scar mentally towards the one thats break the heart...each line painted a picture of how love can be so cruel especially when a person thinks that things are fine....bottom line good work...hope to see more of ya work...keep droppin those lines of pure resentment and promise called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

sometimes the scar is deeper than mentally...emotional damage is worse

 

[BlackRoses]

that simple line right there hit me hard, because i know the exact feeling to "live" for someone, as you said..and them take it so lightly, when you're giving your heart and soul to them..i can feel your pain deep in this joint..the hopelessness and the true to-the-soul pain thats felt when you're hearts broken..very nice drop..feel like i'm crying with ya..lol.

lol im glad u liked but dnt cry becuz u have to go thro relationships like that to appreciate that soulmate even more