For Poetry Lovers...Be Elighten

[Tupacfan]

WTF! And your asking for feedback with that type of expression...lmao at fingers snapping.. GTFO.

all jokes aside,

I think you have some lines that stood out, but its hard to even say nice poetical verses when its about bitch this, bitch that.. We ain't tryna hear all that..

Come with sumfin different and maybe I can give better feedback.. In the mean time chill on ayo bitch, theirs other ways to express that.. But to each to its ow. I guess.. Its your voice and you have every right to practice that however you wish too.. But stuff like that infect the minds of a child, young people.. soon we gon have a generation full of em saying ayo bitch, and all the profanity bs language I don't tolerate.

But keep on expressing..just be selective with ur verbs next time.

Peace!

 

[Lex!]

lmao it was just a joke and i was making it up as i go honestly i have more sense then a common day coon

but thanks for the feedback and i do real poetry from the heart this is just what i call this a comedic haiku well not haiku but

something like it

 

[Tupacfan]

lmao it was just a joke and i was making it up as i go honestly i have more sense then a common day coon
but thanks for the feedback and i do real poetry from the heart this is just what i call this a comedic haiku well not haiku but
something like it

lmao at haiku!
I understand it was coming off as a joke, and its all good to joke.

But you should drop a heartfelt poetry piece tho.. I'm always reading giving people feedback, matter of fact this my resident lol.. That last one was a joke.

and ur welcome for the feedback, I hope to see you around this forum more often (poetry material wise) also u should go to the poets introduction in the thread "why do you write poetry?"

Peace!