Fight Klub Exhibition(s)

[Tha Killa]

I think it should be capped at 3 rounds. I'ma drop my vote in a minute. Basically I vote for Raw, but I'm gonna drop a detailed explanation as to why. KTULU had my vote 'til Raw's last verse.

 

[KTULU IS BACK]

Nice nice dope so far i have to see Ktulu hit back to totally decide but so far so good.

well its over, that was the end

 

[KTULU IS BACK]

I give KTULU the slight edge because of his delivery. I think his rhyme scheme was slightly better and he has the edge with his punchlines. Raw was good too though, but it seems as though Raw verses were moreso spoken word than a freestyle. Its almost like Lupe Fiasco and Lil Wayne rapping. KTULU would be Wayne and Raw would be Lupe. I like Lupe's subject matter is much better than Waynes, but I feel like Wayne would out freestyle Lupe on the strength of punchlines and delivery. I don't even like Wayne by the way, but my point is styles make match ups they have much different styles. All and all it was good battle though.

lupe stans are literally crying real life tears right now lol

 

[VIBE]

Only hollerin I do via PM is my hollerin at the ladies
My style is so sick if you cannibalized me you'd get rabies

That was a nice

KTULU takes it easy... EASY!

anyone catching the battles lately from Grind Time?

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Only hollerin I do via PM is my hollerin at the ladies
My style is so sick if you cannibalized me you'd get rabies

That was a nice

KTULU takes it easy... EASY!

anyone catching the battles lately from Grind Time?

That's not even a diss. He's talking about himself and ladies then how sick he is. Nothing about how wack I am, how much I suck, how he will beat me, how he will destroy me..........so how is that a diss? Do you know what a battle rhyme is? You don't talk about how cool you are and how sick you are. Lame. Jin would lose EASY against anyone if he spit lines about how cool he is instead of paying attention to his opponent and trying to destroy him. This shit isn't a song. It's a battle. Those lines aren't creative anyway. PLAYED. I'm sorry. But I'm still waiting to see someone explain their vote on how either of us beat each other. Someone told me I wouldn't find fair voters in Donkey BC this subforum doesn't originate in battling, but in other topics that are random and not related to music or criticism of lyrics like Lyrical Executions is or was, shall I say since it's almost dead.

 

[VIBE]

That's not even a diss. He's talking about himself and ladies then how sick he is. Nothing about how wack I am, how much I suck, how he will beat me, how he will destroy me..........so how is that a diss? Do you know what a battle rhyme is? You don't talk about how cool you are and how sick you are. Lame. Jin would lose EASY against anyone if he spit lines about how cool he is instead of paying attention to his opponent and trying to destroy him. This shit isn't a song. It's a battle. Those lines aren't creative anyway. PLAYED. I'm sorry. But I'm still waiting to see someone explain their vote on how either of us beat each other. Someone told me I wouldn't find fair voters in Donkey BC this subforum doesn't originate in battling, but in other topics that are random and not related to music or criticism of lyrics like Lyrical Executions is or was, shall I say since it's almost dead.

What the fuck are you catching feelings for? Take your meds, I didn't say it was a diss. What I mean by nice line was he flipped it on you.

 

[VIBE]

That's not even a diss. He's talking about himself and ladies then how sick he is. Nothing about how wack I am, how much I suck, how he will beat me, how he will destroy me..........so how is that a diss? Do you know what a battle rhyme is? You don't talk about how cool you are and how sick you are. Lame. Jin would lose EASY against anyone if he spit lines about how cool he is instead of paying attention to his opponent and trying to destroy him. This shit isn't a song. It's a battle. Those lines aren't creative anyway. PLAYED. I'm sorry. But I'm still waiting to see someone explain their vote on how either of us beat each other. Someone told me I wouldn't find fair voters in Donkey BC this subforum doesn't originate in battling, but in other topics that are random and not related to music or criticism of lyrics like Lyrical Executions is or was, shall I say since it's almost dead.

Alright, I'll explain it.

KTULU's first verse was shit, yours was too. KTULU's 2nd verse was nice, he did diss you. Your 2nd verse was whatever. You had corny played lines just reworded and all you have is a little bit of wordplay. KTULU's 3rd was the nail in the coffin, he flipped almost every line on you. Again, really no punchlines from you just nice wordplay.

Dude, I battled from 2001-2007. I did all this text shit, keystyle whatever you wanna call it now. This shit is old news to me. The fuck you asking me if I know what rhyming is and shit lol.

You're mad as fuck and caught feelings that a white dude murdered you.

 

[Tha Killa]

Since neither of your first 2 verses really stood out to me and weren't as good as your last verse, I'm gonna solely judge by the last round. If I have to judge by round, then I'll say Raw took Round 1, barely, and KTULU took Round 2 by a nosehair.

While I stay poppin off both barrels of my .22 caliber Derringers,
This faggot namedroppin retarded Cuba Gooding Jr. characters.
Blade is fictional, let's look at reality without your fantasy prism.
Wesley Snipes tax cheatin black ass is getting raped in prison.

The whole gunplay thing is played out and mad unoriginal. Even if you do possess such weaponry it's still unrelated to the subject at hand (unless his username referenced guns) so it was a weak way to start your 3rd verse but the 2nd line was so dope that it made me forgive that 1st one. It was dope the way you flipped his radio line and I was disappointed that the other times you flipped his lines it wasn't as good as this one. I think the 3rd line would have been better if it name dropped a character from another Cuba movie in a creative way but the ending of this section was kinda weak imo.

Personals are the shit in newspapers you use to pickup hoes, brah
My freestylin is just fine, I'm at the park spittin pickup flows, brah
You dead in the water, check the headline of the Herald
Only thing you Cappin is of the Edmund Fitzgerald

This section started off average, and it looks like anything you'd find in any freestyle battle anywhere. The "brah" part was kinda funny, but as someone who's seen keystyle battles that were as good as any Grind Time battle, and as someone who knows a couple of real life champion freestyle battlers, this is the kind of filler section that takes an extremely hot follow-up to not make it seem watered down. I like that you tried to flip his use of "cappin" and your double entendre, but it still didn't make me go GODDAMN like a dope battle rap line is s'posed to. Personals are a very important part of a battle rap and even though it was kinda clever how you flipped the word itself, it still wasn't as good as it could have been imo

Only hollerin I do via PM is my hollerin at the ladies
My style is so sick if you cannibalized me you'd get rabies
No homo at commenting on the size of a male
But for the record my dick's Moby, they call me the white whale

Weak 1st two bars, even tho it was good that you addressed some of what he said, you could have done SO much more than that cannibalize line. That was really weak imo. And you could have followed up the "no homo on commenting on the size of a male" line with something way stronger than that. You don't actually address HIM in this 'til the last line of this verse and that's what cost you imo

SMH at rockin Ron Paul economics, step ya mind up with science-neuro
Put your faith in this white man. Call it investing in the Euro.
I'll make yo mama an atheist who doesn't believe in the supernatural, brah
So she screams when I jam it in her with no rubber, raw: "Material! AHH!"

You know, you could have covered up the fact that you didn't really use any personals by using some multi-syllabic rhymes that would have made everything you DID say sound a whole lot better. If you would have used a multi or two with the "science-neuro" line it would have made up for all the filler in the previous lines but the ending line, and only personal I saw in this verse, was a good ending.

All in all this verse left a lot to be desired nh, since both of the previous two rounds were pretty average and THIS verse would have really put him away if you had added a few multies, personals, and stronger punches.

I can't wait for Christmas, ima "open up this (w)rapper" tonight/
But fuck a knife, I'll scream at the box and my flames will make him feel like he's in after his life/~2
I almost gave up since it's too easy but fuck it, it's cool, never seen anybody suck it like you/
Cuz even if I battled you in a straight jacket, I would throw more "punches" than you/~4

This opener is the kind of beginning line I usually hope to see in a battle verse. It's clever, and sets the tone for a solid verse. Not to mention the multies in this whole section were really sick. A lot better than the average-mediocre 1st two verses you spit. But unlike your 1st two verses you didn't follow up a good opener with a bad follow-up. The last 2 lines were outstanding and didn't have a drop-off like you usually see in keystyles

I could be like you and curse forever but I'll challenge myself and put other words together/
Ladies don't message you, quit playing yourself fag, my inbox is full and you ain't worth-a-letter/~6
He reminds me of Lindsay Lohan, I suggest recovery cuz this unwanted grouch is a dike/
But these punches got KTULU "blind sighted in fear" like walking in haunted houses at night/~8

I was gonna condemn you for saying "I can be you and curse forever" since that rarely leads to anything good, but your multies and phrasing on the lines after it made it dope. I can see that you're starting to get into the groove of things 'cause this verse has been a lot more consistent and less corny than your 1st two. The last two lines were solid two. Even though you could have done mmore with the "blindsided in fear/haunted houses at night" line.

Call me the Solar Joker, I bring the funny with heat, bout ta steal your soul for closure/
And blow your voters my way cuz you couldn't "breeze through tracks" if you rode a roller coaster/~10
So the only way you "blow people out" is happy hour at the gay bars/
Cuz this dude is so "gassed" up, I might throw him some "heat" to launch him and make him an okay "star"/~12

The opening lines of this section made me have that GODDAMN reaction I was talkin' about earlier. The wordplay on this is fucking insane. But the last couple of lines pale in comparison to the 1st two but it still didn't take away from the heat that was the 1st couple.

I get the impression some of you think KTULU is really a "Beast", then you'll hate this depression../
Since I master these freaks cuz my "bars tame him" like locked in a cage of detention/~14
I'm hot with better heat, he's soft like feathers be and that's probably the worst drops I'll ever-see/
So ima eat this emcee, but I'll cook him first cuz "Raw", you'll never be/~16

Once again your wordplay and multies were dope as hell and very well executed. My only knock is that you didn't use as many personals as one would expect in a battle rap, but you were able to flip his lines back on him pretty nicely anyway. The ending could have been stronger but it fits well with the multies you were using so I won't overanalyze it too much. Overall a very good verse from you Raw

Punchlines: Raw
Multis/Multi-Syllabic Rhyming: Raw was the only one who used multies
Flow: KTULU even though Flow is irrelevant in a keystyle battle. Writing a battle to an instrumental can come back to bite you in the ass if you're not careful
Personals: I'd say KTULU by a nose since his 2nd verse incorporated a fucking video of his opponent. Haha. But this was close.
Wordplay: Raw even tho KTULU did do a decent job of flipping Raw's lines on him
Delivery: Raw
Impact: Raw
Structure: KTULU's verse was a lot simpler, which in Donkey is what probably won him this battle, but Raw's was the better of the two.

I know I'm late with this, but since people haven't really explained their reasons for voting I figured I'd come back and post mines. As bad as the first 2 rounds were, the 3rd made for a very good battle since Raw seemed a lot more focused in his last verse than he was in his first 2. I still say that Raw is the overall winner.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

What the fuck are you catching feelings for? Take your meds, I didn't say it was a diss. What I mean by nice line was he flipped it on you.

So it's not a diss but he flipped it on me? Doesn't make sense. Thanks for voting you and Tha Killer. I appreciate it.

 

[C.Melendez]

damn haven't been on here awhile...bout to read verses in a min

 

[C.Melendez]

somebody place the verses in order.....sooo this really didn't start off as a Raw vs K battle? or am im missing something?

anyway plave verses in order

 

[raw-material_ahh]

somebody place the verses in order.....sooo this really didn't start off as a Raw vs K battle? or am im missing something?
anyway plave verses in order

Yeah it could get a bit confusing. I suggest voting based off mine and KTULU's last two verses BC his first one wasn't really against me so the jabs would be lopsideded if you voting based off all 6 verses. Somewhere in there, someone else dropped a verse that we wont count. Maybe he can battle someone else if anyone is reading this thread. I'm on my phone so it'd take some work to put them in order for you in one post.

 

[-Karl-]

I vote Ktulu because raw seems like a bitch.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

I vote Ktulu because raw seems like a bitch.

Cool. Duly noted. Vote counted.

 

[-Karl-]

Cool. Duly noted. Vote counted.

Hi! .

 

[KTULU IS BACK]

I vote Ktulu because raw seems like a bitch.

he really is a whiny little faggot

 

[raw-material_ahh]

he really is a whiny little faggot

Dang......

 

[thedesolateone]

i vote for ktulu

because he had more personals and better structure in his first two verses than raw material imo

raw material got the third round though and came back ill with multis and cleverness

but a little too late

2 to 1 i say the battle goes to ktulu

 

[jai'yesis]

I'll vote on Rounds 2 and 3 since KTULU IS BACK didn't go after raw-material_ahh in round one.

Shut the fuck up you half Spic, I'll deport you over the border

Only thing you "brutally process" is my fucking Taco Bell order

First line = weak diss/ Second line = Funny and strong! Nice follow up to your first line!

I don't respect no light-skinded "Juan", homes

I'm a fucking legend, they call me John Holmes

First line = weak diss again/ Second line = Weak boast

Que pasa, buey? Te llamas That Boy Jay?

Obviously this line ends with that boy gay.

First line = very corny, not even a diss/ Second line = corny, played, not funny

Jay-Z, Jay Electronica, Jay Dot Cole

Y'all run out of rap names? Y'all unoriginole.

First line = ????/ Second line = Weak diss

I'll beat your Chicano ass from here to Oaxaca

I see you shivering over there like a fuckin Chihuahua

First line = Weak diss, where is the metaphor/ Second line = Funny but could use a little more punch

I got electricity for every ethnicity

Explicitly make history out of rappers in my vicinity

First line = Weak boast/ Second line = Weak boast

First son the blacks, they can work on my plantation

Then son the Latins, they can import coke to my nation

More weak boasts

Plus I need a railroad, so I gotta get me some Asians

Who else is left? Guess I'll genocide the Tazmanians.

So far last 6 lines aren't dissing raw-material_ahh now

Or fuck your girl's canal, call her a Panamanian.

Houston's next great rap star? Fool, bow down in my presence.

First line = Weak/ Second line = ???

We know you're a faggot, we've got video evidence:

???

His "lines fell apart" after I spat tornado flows/

Now they "register weak signals" like broken radios/~2

First line = Kind of a diss/ Second line = Kind of good

This dude is more emotional than an emo vampire, backing up his lines that are played/

But he won't "rise tonight" cuz I'll lay his corpse to rest with a sharp line like I'm "Blade"/~4

First line = Weak diss/ Second line = Best line of the battle so far!

Quit free-styling trash! Writing something about me is a suggestion/

You lack personals so bad, you can't even answer your own psychiatrist’s questions/~6

First line = Weak diss/ Second line = Kind of good

By now, I won't blame people if they never vote on this/

Cuz they'll assume you're "capped" like a salary since I wrote a diss/~8

First line = ???? IDK what to say, neither a diss or boast/ Second line = Ehhhh kind of weak diss

Fuck squashing this pal, I'm coming with proper heat now, making beef like slaughtering cows/

You'd be a lottery foul, a mistake if I chose you for my team so quit PMing me hurt, hollering ow!/~10

First line = Weak diss/ Second line = Weak diss again

These lyrics gonna "light" you up and "blow" you out like birthday cake candles/

Next steps, I'll "cut" ya then "serve" ya so I can "eat" you like cannibals/~12

Good, good!

Cuz you haven't got big enough yet to be a full course dinner/

You're more like a dessert cuz it’s sweet you dropping shit to make me the winner/~14

First line = Weak diss/ Second line = Funny but I'm not sure about how hard this diss was, lol.

I respect shootemwon but don't get why he thinks you're good so check-this-stuff-my-verse-is-so-hard/

Cuz I'm like a walking bank, I went in this thread and left-rich-cuz-I’m-cursed-with-gold-bars/~16

Really the only sick multis of the battle but kind of weak

While I stay poppin off both barrels of my .22 caliber Derringers,

This faggot namedroppin retarded Cuba Gooding Jr. characters.

First line = boast/ Second line = I don't see how it's a diss to say someone is namedropping characters??? Weak.

Blade is fictional, let's look at reality without your fantasy prism.

Wesley Snipes tax cheatin black ass is getting raped in prison.

First line = Not a diss or boast/ Second line = Are you calling raw-material_ahh a tax cheatin black ass? Isn't he mexican? Sounds like a Wesley Snipes diss, lol

Personals are the shit in newspapers you use to pickup hoes, brah

My freestylin is just fine, I'm at the park spittin pickup flows, brah

BOASTS

You dead in the water, check the headline of the Herald

Only thing you Cappin is of the Edmund Fitzgerald

Weak diss

Only hollerin I do via PM is my hollerin at the ladies

My style is so sick if you cannibalized me you'd get rabies

First line = so?/ Second line = half boast, half diss, weak

No homo at commenting on the size of a male

But for the record my dick's Moby, they call me the white whale

First line = ????/ Second line = BOAST again

SMH at rockin Ron Paul economics, step ya mind up with science-neuro

Put your faith in this white man. Call it investing in the Euro.

First line = what?/ Second line = boast again

I'll make yo mama an atheist who doesn't believe in the supernatural, brah

So she screams when I jam it in her with no rubber, raw: "Material! AHH!"

I LOVE THE END. You made up for that weak first line.

I can't wait for Christmas, ima "open up this (w)rapper" tonight/

But fuck a knife, I'll scream at the box and my flames will make him feel like he's in after his life/~2

First line = Sick intro/ Second line = I got the Hell reference. Not sure most would. Kind of weak but good at the same time

I almost gave up since it's too easy but fuck it, it's cool, never seen anybody suck it like you/

Cuz even if I battled you in a straight jacket, I would throw more "punches" than you/~4

First line = Weak/ Second line = Sick

I could be like you and curse forever but I'll challenge myself and put other words together/

Ladies don't message you, quit playing yourself fag, my inbox is full and you ain't worth-a-letter/~6

Follow up a set up with a sick punch

He reminds me of Lindsay Lohan, I suggest recovery cuz this unwanted grouch is a dike/

But these punches got KTULU "blind sighted in fear" like walking in haunted houses at night/~8

This is true battling, a sick set up that's also a diss followed by a sick punch even though the punch could have been better but what else rhymes with unwanted grouch is a dike? lol

Call me the Solar Joker, I bring the funny with heat, bout ta steal your soul for closure/

And blow your voters my way cuz you couldn't "breeze through tracks" if you rode a roller coaster/~10

Now this is the line of the whole battle, crazy sick

So the only way you "blow people out" is happy hour at the gay bars/

Cuz this dude is so "gassed" up, I might throw him some "heat" to launch him and make him an okay "star"/~12

Really bringing the end now

I get the impression some of you think KTULU is really a "Beast", then you'll hate this depression../

Since I master these freaks cuz my "bars tame him" like locked in a cage of detention/~14

first line was a weak diss or maybe just a set up because the second line was aight

I'm hot with better heat, he's soft like feathers be and that's probably the worst drops I'll ever-see/

So ima eat this emcee, but I'll cook him first cuz "Raw", you'll never be/~16

First line = impressed this is the only boast and not much a boast because he went back to dissing again/ Second line = you know, kind of played but new life was breathed on it

Based off of Round 2, I'd give raw-material_ahh the vote because he actually attacked KTULU IS BACK the whole time. Not with every line, but with every set of lines. There was a period there that KTULU is back went 6 lines not even talking about raw-material_ahh. I didn't see much from either of them. They both had very weak lines. But of the two, I think raw-material_ahh wins that round because he actually stayed battling and even though most of their lines were weak, raw-material_ahh's were less played and more directed at KTULU IS BACK and he had maybe 1 or 2 bars that really stuck out whereas KTULU IS BACK had 1 I think I really liked. And on the final round, I think it was no question that raw-material_ahh kicked ass. KTULU IS BACK's verse was filled with a serious amount of boasts and the disses he did write were weak except for the line line. He hit hard in the end. Nonetheless, raw-material_ahh seemed more focused and from the gate threw sick punch after sick punch and the ending, "Raw, you'll never be" might be right because KTULU IS BACK didn't seem to have that rawness a true battler shows. It seemed like KTULU IS BACK focused more on flow, corny lines that were attempts at comedy, and personals. I'll give KTULU IS BACK the nod on personals but the thing is, 80% of his personals weren't disses and the ones that were didn't punch right. This isn't to say raw-material_ahh didn't have personals, he just didn't have as many but everyone he did have punched harder. Both had boasts and that's expected in rhyming of any avenue but you can't expect to boast 50% of your verse and win.

My vote goes to raw-material_ahh in a lopsided battle.

 

[KTULU IS BACK]

niggas got the game confused

i dont even have to talk about the other rapper

like jay don't respond, i don't need to respond

smarten up