Drop some bars

[grYmes]

It's in my profile too but fuck it, let's see some feedback.

My pen invokes madness to the average

Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage

I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around

Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound

Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind

Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time

Crawled a river of shit, out clean the other side

I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies

In these youngsters, who don't know the difference

Between the trigga man or the character witness

Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly niggas

on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin

Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red

Fuck Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead

Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high

God applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

 

[RickyRich]

It's in my profile too but fuck it, let's see some feedback.

My pen invokes madness to the average

Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage

I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around

Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound

Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind

Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time

Crawled a river of shit, out clean the other side

I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies

In these youngsters, who don't know the difference

Between the trigga man or the character witness

Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly niggas

on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin

Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red

Fuck Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead

Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high

God applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

u from toronto ?

 

[RickyRich]

over this beat

 

[RickyRich]

"he was persuaded, to work late in the kitchen,

another student without a family paying his tuition,

he envisioned a life far beyond his experiences,

though the rat races last place, stuck washing dishes,

bitches at the orphanage, grouped him with the troubled kids,

never had the opportunity to prove that was talented,

he had a gift, but no way to manage it,

now lost the confidence his mother gave to him,

he once saw stories as the decks were spinning,

could hear the art when reading what was written,

either up on the wall or Ether down on the page,

and could read what the heart of breaker would say,

he’s a cultural kid that got lost in the system,

fighting his way back through work and education,

though at times he questions his will to stay or not,

coz he only feels at home when his 'phones play that hip hop..

 

[grYmes]

It's in my profile too but fuck it, let's see some feedback.

My pen invokes madness to the average

Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage

I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around

Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound

Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind

Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time

Crawled a river of shit, out clean the other side

I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies

In these youngsters, who don't know the difference

Between the trigga man or the character witness

Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly niggas

on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin

Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red

Fuck Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead

Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high

God applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

u from toronto ?

Naw man, Maryland originally. Live in Louisana now. Feelin the verse by the way.

 

[RickyRich]

It's in my profile too but fuck it, let's see some feedback.

My pen invokes madness to the average

Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage

I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around

Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound

Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind

Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time

Crawled a river of shit, out clean the other side

I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies

In these youngsters, who don't know the difference

Between the trigga man or the character witness

Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly niggas

on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin

Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red

Fuck Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead

Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high

God applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

u from toronto ?

Naw man, Maryland originally. Live in Louisana now. Feelin the verse by the way.

oo cuz u mention rob ford which was my mayor of my city lol. Respect

 

[TonyDubbz]

Garbage ass thread by a garbage ass poster

 

[grYmes]

I sense prior beef... Everybody got issues this week lol.

 

[DOPEdweebz]

we got a battle thread for that

 

[SouthsideShawn]

Heres my conversations with mama

Been trying to stay away from the drama

some reason this shit keep on following me

I know be stressin you and dad out sorry for that mama

Idontknow about my future cuz that shit aint lookin to clear for me

Havin vision of my death in my dreams shit so unreal to me mama

You Should hear what these niggaz are saying about me mama

They Trying to take me away from you hope you can say pray for me mama

Aint been easy as of late im trying to be the best son for you mama

I Remember all the things you did for me and its appreciated mama

All those lates nights you spent helping me with my homework

even though you had to wake up early next morning for work

But some how you ended up getting everything done

No one women can ever take your place mama you always be number one

I know You watching how much i been drinkin as of late hoping i will stop

you dont want me turn into my uncle with a missing liver i promise mama i will stop

Feeling stressed out sucidial thoughts running thru my mind like everyday

asking God what does it take to fix a broken soul and can he take the pain away

I know You want me to become a policer officer one day but thats not me mama

I know you don't understand right now why but soon you will understand mama

Dad always told me he was glad he found you cuz he knew you was the right one

everything takes time but im still searching for my right one

Mama I kno You Try rearrange me and Jel to get back together

but she not ready for this life, Just maybe one day we can get back together

Told you about L how much I love & care for her but you said she not the right one

Took Me awhile to realize but damn your right mama she wasnt the right one

Thought she was the girl of my dreams

but she out here chasing a nigga with a fake balla dreams

Cant blame her mamma im not the one for her

maybe just maybe one day i can be the one for her

I kno i should chasin these girls until im 69 Yrs Old

But im only 23 still got time before i turn 69 yrs old

i did disz over this


what should i change up and does it sound wack . everythin i sed it 100percent true

 

[illestni99ainne]

I don't really be rhyming like that but here yall go...

TRAVELING PATIENTLY ON DAMASCUS, THE ROAD TO DIVINITY/PRAYING TO THE LORD THAT I WILL BE MORE THAN JUST AN EMCEE/THIS LIFE IS KILLING ME, THERE HASTO BE MORE TO ITTHAN THIS/LIFE CAN`T ALL BE ABOUT POPPING `CRIS, KILLING NI99A`S AND POLITICS/ASKED THE LORD THAT IF I DIED TO PLEASE TAKE CARE OF MY NEXT OF KIN/BUT MY PRAYERS FELL ON DEAFENED EARS, THROUGH THE YEARS I`VE LED A LIFE OF SIN/IT TOOK THE DEATH OF MY GRANNY TO WAKE ME UP FROM THIS WICKED HIPNOSIS/WHO TOLD ME TO BE WITHOUT GOD IS LIKE YOUR SOUL IS CHOKING/BEING ON THIS EARTH IS NOT A RIGHT, BUT SOMETHING YOU EARN/JESUS PAID FOR OUR SINS WITH HIS LIFE, NOW THE FAVOR MUST BE RETURNED/MY MEMORY`S CAPACITY CANNOT REMEMBER MY DAY OF CONCEPTION/SO I`M THANKFUL BY CARRESSING EVERY DAY, EVERY MINUTE, AND EVERY SECOND/THIS LIFE`S A BLESSING DUKE, SO WHY NOT PRAISE OUR ALMIGHTY CREATOR/BECAUSE AT HEAVEN`S GATES ALL WILL FALL TO THEIR KNEES KNOWING HE IS OUR SAVIOR/NOT TRYING TO COME OFF PREACHY DAWG CUZ IM FAR FROM SANCTIFIED/BUT I`VE SEEN THINGS MOST MEN WON`T SEE IN THEIR ENTIRE LIVES/WALKING AROUND THIS COLD CITY, DEAD TO THE WORLD/STRUGGLING DAY TO DAY TO SAVE OUR ONCE BLACK MIGHTY PEARL

 

[dj pre-k]

see me in da streets and im on dem 29s

all i eat id fried meat and pork rhinds

i dont put mayonaise on my bread

pimpin aint dead hoes just scared

i dont break dance, fuck that shit

im into doin things like fuckin yo bitch

i got mad skills dawgy dawg word up

ill murder your whole family for fun word up

im ill

 

[narv]

chorus)3x

everyday us smokeing, every day us praying.

 

[shit happens]

ain't no hoes in here foh

 

[narv]

smokeing maryjane, high as a spaceship. praying to lord

that I reach the top. like diamonds keeping it rocking. music

up as the spliff blazeing. snow or rain still grinding.

 

[miamaus]

i find it very good

 

[dj pre-k]

me and narv turnin in tha lac

got a big subwoofer in the back

i goes boom when i want it to

im sick ah choo i got tha flu

i need a shot only one and ill make it

i speiclaize in gettin hot girld naked

when im flowin you know im tha best

i brush my teeth with crest cuz im fresh

 

[Paco Mansin]

Step your game up homie..Really..!!

 

[teammedia]

It's in my profile too but fuck it, let's see some feedback.

My pen invokes madness to the average

Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage

I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around

Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound

Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind

Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time

Crawled a river of shit, out clean the other side

I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies

In these youngsters, who don't know the difference

Between the trigga man or the character witness

Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly niggas

on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin

Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red

Fuck Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead

Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high

God applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

 

[teammedia]

It's cool