This is just ill all the way around!
Every line hit hard, and the word play, smh.. it was nice! It gave a vivid image to it too!
An up to par piece I enjoyed reading.
Anyways, thanks for sharing, if your new to posting your poetic pieces here, drop an introduction in the first thread as into "why do you write poetry?"
Every line hit hard, and the word play, smh.. it was nice! It gave a vivid image to it too!
An up to par piece I enjoyed reading.
Anyways, thanks for sharing, if your new to posting your poetic pieces here, drop an introduction in the first thread as into "why do you write poetry?"
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