Batman Fan Comic - The Deal

[earth two superman]

 

[earth two superman]

Thoughts? Personally, it could REALLY use a proofreader. Saw so many typos. Love the Bill Hicks quote (though i dont think it quite fits in this situation except for the first few sentences) and the art, but I dunno. Something about it I wasnt crazy about.

 

[Splackavelli]

pretty good for an amateur.

 

[Lou Cypher]

Saw this on reddit the other day. Not bad at all.

 

[dalyricalbandit]

this shit wild

 

[Sour-Cream]

So joker and Bruce are faggots that died like bitches.